Static Noise

[vail_kagami]

TITLE: Static Noise
FANDOM: Tokyo Babylon/X-1999
PAIRING: Subaru/OMC, Seishiro/Subaru
TABLE: # 7 - Miscellaneous A
PROMPT: 12. Watching
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 839
SUMMARY: Subaru is determined to get on with his life, and Seishiro doesn't share. (Or: The one were Subaru is nineteen and Seishiro is not creepy at all.)
WARNINGS: Does Seishiro being

Comments

[misura]

Your glimpses into Subaru's mind broke my heart; your Seishirou seriously creeped me out. Both in a very good way though, if such is possible.

I loved the mood you created in this piece, even if I couldn't help but feel sorry for Subaru.

[vail_kagami]

I'm not sure if it's even possible not to feel sorry for Subaru.

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad Seishiro was appropriately creepy.

[ruthk]

Love that sentence "giving the ultimate proof that Subaru had indeed died and turned into his own ghost when he was sixteen." It fits post TB-Subaru so much.
And, yes, while Seishirou dispatching of any would-be-lovers of Subaru was to be expected, the way you told it made it especially creepy. Great job (also loved the Hokuto one, but was too lazy to comment).

[vail_kagami]

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked it.
I was worried Seishiro wouldn't be creepy enough, but apparently he is. ;P

[lucid_babbles]

O_0 Am severely creeped out. It's like watching a horror movie that you already know the ending of, know that someone's going to die, something bad is going to happen...but you can't look away. LOVELY.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you!

[24snowyli_chan]

wow, it's been a while since i've read any fanfiction for X, but this has been worth it, i liked how at this point Subaru just accepts things, he doesn't have a true desire to pursue any passion anymore (since the only person he wants thinks he's insignificant) and the desperation on his part to move on is sad because you know that it's never going to happen, Subaru isn't going to give up on his obsession in meaning something to Seishiro that it's pretty much useless. Great job :)

[vail_kagami]

the desperation on his part to move on is sad because you know that it's never going to happen
Yes. That.
It's just tragic, even thogh it gave us one of the most twisted love stories of all time.

Thanks for reading!

[rose_erato]

Amazing work you did on this fic. And I agree with everyone else that Seishirou's wonderfully (and appropriately) creepy in this.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! Creepyness is what I aimed for.