Comments | vail_kagami: Static Noise

vail_kagami

Static Noise

May 28, 2009 04:59

TITLE: Static Noise
FANDOM: Tokyo Babylon/X-1999
PAIRING: Subaru/OMC, Seishiro/Subaru
TABLE: # 7 - Miscellaneous A
PROMPT: 12. Watching
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 839
SUMMARY: Subaru is determined to get on with his life, and Seishiro doesn't share. (Or: The one were Subaru is nineteen and Seishiro is not creepy at all.)
WARNINGS: Does Seishiro being ( Read more... )

medium: story, table: misc a, fandom: tokyo babylon/x-1999

Comments 18

amamiya_rin July 5 2009, 08:06:36 UTC

now i really truly convinced, that sei IS an assasin PLUS a stalker like never before. this fic really fit him well *sigh*

agreed with lucid babbles,... i cant look away >.< creepy

vail_kagami July 13 2009, 20:11:25 UTC

Seishiro was as reepy as he was awesome. I'm glad you liked it!

etrangere July 12 2009, 19:44:34 UTC

whoa! I love the way you seize the impression of scary! awesome.

vail_kagami July 13 2009, 20:11:44 UTC

Thank you!

shinodabear August 17 2009, 14:30:51 UTC

Eep! That was creepy! (And so very Seishrio.) I loved it. But poor Subaru! :( These two always break my heart. It was worse that I read X/1999 before Tokyo Babylon, so that entire time I'm reading the (mostly) light and happy series, I'm just picturing their final scene together.

vail_kagami August 17 2009, 20:22:16 UTC

Same here. Sometimes I would forget about X and just enjoy the bubbly fluffieness of some scene, and then Seishiro would do or say something that reminded me and I'd feel my fingernails curl up.
I sometimes wonder what an effect the ending of TB would have had on me if I hadn't known before.

shirogiku June 9 2011, 16:37:10 UTC

Wow. This is one of the best creepy!Sei pieces ever. You have some amazing descriptions, like darkness smiling at Subaru and static. It gave me shivers, and I'm nearly immune to horror movies/stories.

Subaru is spot-on.

<333

Too bad you don't have longer stories:(

P.S.

I loved and added to memories all your tb/x/1999 stories, but this one is just perfect.

vail_kagami June 10 2011, 22:10:18 UTC

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked this.

When I wrote these fics, I didn't have the time or mindset for long stories. I'm quite happy with getting the short ones done, actually - and for keeping them short. It's something I usually struggle with.