A Quarter of Your Kingdom (Part1)

[vail_kagami]

Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Doctor (10), Owen
Summary: Jack and the Doctor have saved the world. Again. Now it is up to Owen to save them, on threat of imaginary death. Such is the life of a doctor at Torchwood. 
Note: Written for nightrider101 who also kindly betaed it, as thanks for a generous donation at tails_for_paws.
Split due to length.
Note 2:  Now illustrated

Comments

[dock_leaf]

I love this! I especially like the explanation of Boom! being a technical term...*g*

Especially good interaction between Jack and Owen, too.

[darthhellokitty]

“I’m the Doctor, by the way.” Owen could practically hear the capital D.

“So am I,” he explained. “The doctor in charge here, just so you know. Don’t do that.”

I can hear that! Owen is in charge here, for sure.

Interesting! And a second part already, so I'm not even finished enjoying this!

[vail_kagami]

Sure you can. Glad you like it!

[rose_cat]

I read this when you first posted but didn't comment. (Bad Rose Cat!)

I really like Owen's POV in this -- it's not something you see often in Jack/Doctor fic.

“I’m the Doctor, by the way.” Owen could practically hear the capital D.

You're right; he does say it with a capital D! And now I'll always hear it :)

“I am not going to undress in your…” The Doctor stopped, and turned to take a look around their fake tourist information centre. “People are actually falling for this?” he asked in obvious amazement.

Oh, I'd pay good money to see that on the show! XD

...as they made it down the steps to Owen’s working place - reminding him once again why this was a really, really stupid place for a medical area.

I've wondered about that myself. Shouldn't they at least have a ramp? Do they lower bodies and such down on pulleys from the gallery?

“Who’d want a quarter of Torchwood?” the Doctor wondered, to Jack’s indignation.Hee

[vail_kagami]

I fixed the link. Thanks for pointing that out.

Fanfic: A good way for pointing out what's wrong with the show!