SPN Fic: And this Great Blue World of Ours | Part 2, Chapter 14

[vail_kagami]

Title: And this Great Blue World of Ours (2.14)
Fandom: Supernatural
Beta: minviendha
Characters (overall): Dean, Castiel, Sam, plus a number of angels and demons
Rating (overall): NC-17
Warnings (overall): violence, torture, drug use, insanity, mentions of rape
Spoilers: Going AU during episode 5.18: Point of No Return. No spoilers for after season five.
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[marziebarz]

No you cant I dont what just happened oh god I told myself I wasn't gonna review if I didnt have coherent things to say which is why its been so long since I reviewed because what is coherency but WHAT DID YOU DO NO NO NO NO SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM

[vail_kagami]

Yes, this is kind of the reaction I anticipated for this chapter. I'm sorry. It's a dirty job, but it has to be done. :)

[quickreaver]

OMG, I just skimmed the above comment and I CAN'T WAIT TO READ! :D

[vail_kagami]

I hope it doesn't disappoint. This one is kind of mean.

[quickreaver]

It did NOT disappoint! I had an 'uh-oh!' moment at the end there, and it's making me squirm hard for the next chapter. WHAT'S GOING ONNNNN? :D

[keiu_olari]

Oh my god no no no no NO what did you do what did you do this is not happening and it's all my own damn fault really because I told myself I wouldn't read until the story was completed and then work through it in a calm civilised way and leave comments on chapters in a dignified manner but I just couldn't resist sneaking a peek every now and then - hello, curiosity? Meet your cat - and now I don't know how I'll wait for another two weeks because SammySammySammySammy NO and I can't. Even though this is extremely poignant plot-wise, in a literary sense, if this all doesn't work out somehow, I just can't.

[vail_kagami]

Well, the godd thing is, there are only two more parts coming, so you don't have to play the waiting game for long here. :)
I'm sorry about this chapter. I know it's not a noce road to take things.
Thank you for your comment, by the way!

[keiu_olari]

Just two more parts? Man oh man... I'm feeling really conflicted right now - because on the one hand, I'm excited and dying of curiosity to know what happens next and how it all ends, but on the other hand, I'm kinda terrified to know what happens next and how it all ends, because I'm getting this awful awful vibe that Sam has been so broken for so long, I just don't know whether there's a way back from that cliff's edge. Plus, funnily though it may sound, I'm used to this story being there, y'know, and if it's completed, it's still there of course but it's done and there'll be no more so... yeah, conflicted.

Still, whatever end may come, cheers on the home stretch!

*off to pace anxiously in anticipation of more fic, keeping all available fingers crossed for Sammy*

[sickbay23]

Absolut fantastic, i couldn't stop reading. You can feel the tension gets up higher and higher. Jena who'd find a way to kill her brother, Dean who's in a bad mood, Sam who didn't think he'll survive this and seeing the way Sam changes himself after they gave him demonblood. The Tension goes higher and higher. Amazing writing.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! The tension is actually coming to its climax in the next chapter.

words can't even express

[catachrest]

I hope Cas and Jena are prepared to freaking tie Dean down for the next scene or he is going to explode. Aaaaaargh!!!

Can't we take them home and feed the hot chocolate and tuck them into safe warm beds yet? Please? :-)

I cannot believe how well you've structured this. This is me, floored. And nibbling my nails to the quick in anticipation of the ending....

Re: words can't even express

[vail_kagami]

Aw, your poor nails! I hope there'll be anything left of them when the next chapter comes up next week.
Hot chocolate sounds great! I'll make that suggestion to Dean, I'm sure he'll like it.