Comments | vail_kagami: SPN Fic: run

vail_kagami

SPN Fic: run

Jan 23, 2012 22:36

Title: run
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam (Dean)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: very abstract, weird spacing, insanity (?)
Spoilers: Up to 7.11
Words: 2056
Summary: He has to find Dean.
Note: Written for a prompt by rainylemons at the most recent ohsam commentfic-meme.

( The silence has swallowed every sound but his heart that hurts him with every step. Like a knife stabbing his insides in a perfectly healthy rhythm. )

fandom: supernatural, medium: story, prompt fill

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vail_kagami January 24 2012, 15:01:01 UTC

Thank you! Creepy is what it was supposed to be. :)

mamapranayama January 23 2012, 22:14:59 UTC

Wow ... awesomely cool and creepy story. I loved it!:)

vail_kagami January 24 2012, 15:01:16 UTC

Thanks a lot!

monicawoe January 23 2012, 22:56:15 UTC

Beautifully creepy and unsettling. The atmosphere of this piece reminds me of Silent Hill.

These two lines:
One day he will dream of being alone in an empty space that never contained anything but him,

Sometimes he dreams that monsters don’t exist and all hunters are insane.

...are magnificent!

vail_kagami January 24 2012, 16:44:26 UTC

Thank you so much!

I actually love Silent Hill. I didn't even think of it when I wrote this, but I take it as a big compliment.

monicawoe January 24 2012, 23:51:10 UTC

Silent Hill is my favorite horror game series, so it was meant as a great compliment!
2 is still my favorite, though 3 is pretty great too. Homecoming was the only one I haven't liked, but luckily SH:Downpour looks amazing!

minviendha January 23 2012, 23:31:29 UTC

...andddd you did it again alkdjlfk this is gloriously creepy.

Adding this one to my recs list, and it would have been on my horror recs if I hadn't just posted that like a week ago.

We'll do a second edition, just for you.

vail_kagami January 24 2012, 16:46:12 UTC

Huh. Awesome! A second edition would mean even more horror recs! I love horror stories - when I'm in the mood. And I'm happy you think this qualifies as one.

Also, thanks for making me blush!

4422shini January 23 2012, 23:37:58 UTC

;____________; poor fucked up Sammy! I really like how disturbing and incoherent his head space is in this fic. Well done!

vail_kagami January 24 2012, 16:46:45 UTC

His head is not a good place to be...

Thank you!