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vaberella

Merlin Fanfic...Trinity

Jul 03, 2010 10:27

Title: Trinity ( Read more... )

gwen/arthur, gwen/morgana, guinevere, gwen/lancelot, gwen/merlin, merlin, arthur

Comments 6

toya121 July 3 2010, 16:40:55 UTC

"I am only Guinevere"
The most powerful line in the story. Loved reading it, can't wait to read more of your work.

vaberella July 3 2010, 17:22:04 UTC

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it. ^_^

toya121 November 3 2010, 01:42:01 UTC

when are you going to write more? :)

miki_hime1221 July 3 2010, 16:42:48 UTC

I think you did a wonderful job with this. One suggestion I have is that you make your block paragraphs (really long paragraphs) into shorter ones. It can be a little overwhelming for the reader at first glance. It'll probably make it flow better. Other than that, it was fantastic.

vaberella July 3 2010, 17:23:58 UTC

Actually that crossed my mind. When I looked back at my post all I could think was, "I don't think I'd read this." I found it intimidating as well. I tend to write rather long things, but this was daunting and I found it so because of the level of angst. I'll be sure to take your advice for my future stories.

Thanks again. ^_^

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Re: Well done. vaberella July 3 2010, 20:23:23 UTC

First off thanks for the review. Second, if you'd like to talk someone else about the Arthur/Gwen/Lancelot thing, then I'd gladly talk. I go by this name on msn through hotmail and I have the same name on yahoo although I don't use that much and I have the same name on Skype. I don't know anyone but myself who watches the show to chat over the eps anyway ( ... )