Caught

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Title: Caught
Part: 1/1
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Anniversary Challenges: Week one prompt - Caught in the act
Genre: slash, romance, humour
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl

Feedback: Please, yes, I love feedback! =^^=

Summary: While Jazz does not mind getting caught, Prowl cannot take it as lightly as his lover. But now they both have to deal with it.

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Comments

[dark_daebereth]

Heh, only poor, law abiding Prowl could get so upset over being caught racing. Nice dialogue between and from them, and its really well done in that you have to keep guessing until the end as to the topic. Thanks for sharing!

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Well, don't forget the fact it was an ILLEGAL racing. XD And while Prowl could never refuse his Jazz anything, he certainly will have nightmares over what getting caught did for his reputation with the Autobots.
Thank you. I am glad to hear the guessing was there. It was my intention to keep it like that. The revealance at the end was supposed to be like a bang.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

[renegadewriter8]

XP Very well written! For a moment there you had me thinking that they had done something... ejem... naughty.. XD Specially with Jazz's description of the event XD

[usagi_atemu_tom]

I am absolutely glad to hear that because it was exactly my intention to let the readers think the bots had been caught during interfacing under the stars while in truth they only did something really harmless (Prowl of course begs to differ the 'harmless').
It was not so easy to keep the double meaning and I am glad I have such an attentive betareader to point out the flaws in meaning that I sometimes still miss.

Anyway, thank you so much for the review. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

[tsumiden]

oooh naughty prowl, nice work, here i thought they had done something naughtier then a race. well written great dialogue

[usagi_atemu_tom]

As was my intention and I am glad the double meaning got through.
Thank you so very much for the review. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

[cmdrtekk]

Nicely done, nicely set up. I kept waiting for the "twist" on what they had been caught at. What fun.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Thank you very much. Yes, I wanted to keep the readers thinking something naughty happened and then it turns out it was all harmless (not that Prowl thinks of it as harmless, as you might have noticed). I am happy to hear you enjoyed the story. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

[sideslip_tf]

Now that was funny! I was wondering what in the world they had done that caused Prowl so much embarrassment. I can certainly see how Prowl is going to get grief from the twins.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

And maybe not even from the twins alone. After all, Prowl is fretting because, as the bot with clear reputation and role model it does not do him good to get caught illegally racing. At least this is what he thinks.

Thank you so very much for the review. I am happy to hear you enjoyed the story.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\