Caught

Sep 09, 2011 18:26

Title: Caught
Part: 1/1
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Anniversary Challenges: Week one prompt - Caught in the act
Genre: slash, romance, humour
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl

Feedback: Please, yes, I love feedback! =^^=

Summary: While Jazz does not mind getting caught, Prowl cannot take it as lightly as his lover. But now they both have to deal with it.

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romance, prowlxjazz: 11, one-shot, rated pg, fanfiction: 2011, transformers

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bluebirdsoaring September 10 2011, 03:46:31 UTC
You kept me guessing right up to the end...I had so many ideas of what Prowl had gotten caught doing =) That was the fun of this story - you kept me guessing the whole way...and really, what cop doesn't like to go fast...just sayin!!

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usagi_atemu_tom September 10 2011, 13:01:31 UTC
*snickers* Yes, even Prowl has a weakness for speed, though he woudl never admit to it out loud. XD
And I am happy to hear that the story left you guessing until the very end. I hope the innuendo came across as well? Because that was my main intention for the storyline. ^^

Thank you so very much for your review, I am glad to know that you enjoyed the story.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

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darkeyes_17 September 10 2011, 04:50:48 UTC
my mind went into the gutter until that last bit....hehe, racing, how cute. I think Prowl would have won though. He's a cop car, he's gotta be fast.

Nice work!

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usagi_atemu_tom September 10 2011, 13:13:18 UTC
I am glad to know that, since pushing my readers mind into the gutter was my main intention. I am also happy to hear you enjoyed the story.
Oh and Prowl indeed won. I put that into the story as well with the intention to write this out as another innuendo. Sadly it turned out that the way I wrote it, would not fit for a racing, therefore in the end I went with my betareaders suggestion of Prowl staying in control of the race. Though I decided that if a racer keeps the control of a race, doesn't it mean he leads and might turn out winner anyway?
And yes, as a cop car Prowl certainly is fast. Though Jazz's alt mode is a racing car, so it had been a tight win, that's for sure. XD

Thank you so very much for your review. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

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