Beginnings - JUSTIFIED (10/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - JUSTIFIED (10/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 3,709 (69,000ish total

Comments

[seimei93]

ahhh.....Cha is so awesome....

[unwritten_ideas]

He is isn't he?

Thanks for reading!

[seimei93]

It is a pleasure reading this ^__^

I only wonder.... Gackt and You are so lucky having Chacha at their side... Always understanding, always ready to help. But who understands and talks to Cha, when he has a problem of that kind....?

[ann456]

Loved it,thankyou and I love Chacha he really see's and knows all!!!A friend in a million!

[unwritten_ideas]

I want a Chacha.

Thank you!

[mind_cell]

This was brilliant! I SEE Junji! And Chacha too. And all of them sitting around that table, and the tension in the air. The very idea of building this chapter's plot around poker is awesome! Did anything influence you, like Gackt's interview or something where he'd be talking about card games?

And i think i am finally starting to understand You. Gackt took him by surprise when he told him about his feelings, and You's first reaction was to reject them. So it all grew like a snowball afterwards...I wonder how he'll "wake up" though. I am so curious to find out what his previous homosexual experience was. And how much it influences him when he's around Gackt.

.....and i SO love this fic with its current rating, but your You/Gackt smut is always award-winning, awww when shall we have some??? XDDD Let me make a guess...Chapter 12? Hopefully? and i won't mind if it'll be in chapters 13,14 and 15, too!

[unwritten_ideas]

When I first planned out this story, I knew exactly what I was doing with every chapter (I even had chunks of dialogue written before I'd even begun) but this chapter was merely planned as "team bonding exercise". Hahaha. I know they do play cards backstage so it seemed like the best and easiest option.

Ahh, we'll see about You. His previous experiences don't come into play though.

The rating will hit NC-17... eventually. Wait and see!

[mind_cell]

You are a teaser, we had 2 R-rated chapters from you already! =P Probably my initial guess was right and it will be in chap 15... *grumble grumble*

Do you know if G really wins all the time in RL?

Aha, so it's not You's previous experiences. Well then, it makes it all even more interesting!

So, we're gonna get a new chapter tomorrow, but this means we'll have to wait for the chapter 12 for 4 days?! Oh no!! Maybe chapter 12 then will be posted on Tuesday? As an exception? Pretty please?? I'll pimp it even harder then, i promise! and that's not blackmailing, no no no XDDDD

[unwritten_ideas]

Wait and see...

I don't know. I've never heard who wins the card games so I'd presume that he doesn't win in that case XD I'd imagine he's good at cards though from his time spent as a dealer and host in casinos, back in his younger days.

But, if chapter 12 is posted on Tuesday, then it'd still be four days until chapter 13 on Saturday. I could always wait until Monday instead of posting tomorrow!

[for_th3_written]

Jun-ji is adorable.

I think you're moving this along quite naturally.
I am rather curious and looking forward to the dawning on You
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[unwritten_ideas]

More people should write Jun-ji!

I'm sure You will wake up eventually!

Thank you!

[shyone05]

I really feel Jun-ji's pain- & elation--I so suck at poker.
Ah, the omniscient Chacha; there's nothing he doesn't see...

[unwritten_ideas]

Ah, its a cliché but it works, right?

I suck at poker too. I know the rules and the hands but can't put a decent hand together to save my life.