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unstealthy

Fic: Refracted Views (2/?)

Apr 11, 2007 20:23

Title: Refracted Views (part 2 of ??)
Rating: R or possibly NC-17, I'm not sure of the dividing line here.
Pairing: Billy Boyd/Dominic Monaghan
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, this is true only in my twisted little mind.
Summary: Set in the current day, our heroes are not doing the jobs you normally associate them with. In part 2 - more of an ( Read more... )

refracted views

Comments 14

mystery_ink April 12 2007, 01:02:44 UTC

I hadn't read the other one, so I just did. I like the realness of it... condoms... taking care of each other... *G* Billy using the babywipes to clean up beforehand. Makes it feel more real, yet not a put off.

Poor Dom... wonder why is Billy being a bit odd... hmmm....

unstealthy April 12 2007, 17:47:34 UTC

Thanks for your comment. Glad you're enjoying it - I'm working on the next instalment!

foxrafer April 12 2007, 03:56:12 UTC

This is a great second chapter. I feel a little concern that it's thinking about Miranda that starts to get Billy aroused, and then he's kinda snarky to Dom later on, but he has just been traveling and that can make me very irritable. I'm so curious to see where you take the story.

unstealthy April 12 2007, 17:48:26 UTC

I'm glad it lived up to expectations! The next chapter is underway. Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

silentdescant April 12 2007, 04:26:25 UTC

I just read both chapters of this and it's very intriguing (and not to mention hot!)! Did I read in a comment somewhere that I should friend this journal for updates?

unstealthy April 12 2007, 17:49:16 UTC

Glad you liked! I'll be posting chapters here, probably not on many comms as there aren't many that take lotrips het. Thanks for commenting!

random_yayness April 12 2007, 05:33:29 UTC

Guh, this was GREAT!! I followed a link from silentdescant, and just WOW. The het sex in the first chapter was UNBELIEVABLY HOT and SEXY. I read very lil het lately and you really just made me miss it. And GUH, the Dom/Billyness. I love this so far! Can't wait for more. :D

unstealthy April 12 2007, 17:50:01 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm working on more, hopefully it won't be too long...

saedulaque April 12 2007, 10:41:39 UTC

Again, nice chapter :) I really enjoy this story, as well as other bits of your writing, so I decided I'd like to add you to my Friends List -- hope you don't mind it :))) Cheers!

unstealthy April 12 2007, 17:50:48 UTC

I'm honoured you want to friend me! Thanks so much - glad you're enjoying.