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[5] Round. And Round. [Nichkhun/Jun.K | Nichkhun/Taecyeon]

Mar 31, 2014 23:45

Fic Title: Round. And Round.
Main Character: Nichkhun, Jun. K
Pairing: Khun. K | TaecKhun
Rating: PG - cursing
Warnings: N/A
Word count: 4,320

Prompt 1: “Can you imagine that, an itch too sensitive to scratch.” Crowded House - Fingers of Love
Prompt 2: Read more... )

main: jun.k, pairing: taecyeon/nichkhun, main: nichkhun, pairing: nichkhun/jun.k, round 1

Comments 4

anonymous April 1 2014, 01:10:33 UTC

So freaking sad but well written. I cried like a baby good job lol

panda_su April 2 2014, 03:04:08 UTC

wow. I dont have much time to leave a proper comment but this was really good. Thank you ^^

ext_2399979 April 2 2014, 07:56:45 UTC

Some stories just linger around once you've read them, and this is one of those! Amazing how it's sad without being super bold and overstated, and how a lot is told between the lines or after the fact without spelling everything out. Really nice technique of telling a story, and leaves me curious and wanting more! Super love how you've pictured Khun and his struggles to get over another and more into himself, beautifully done and I love how a loss leads to a deeper insight of what he truly wants. Also loled a lot at Minjun's screaming hoodie and general persona ~~~~~
So well done, please give us more!~ <3

mychocotango April 6 2014, 06:02:54 UTC

i've never read khunkay before so i didnt really know what to expect. but this has been a wonderful read, the story flows effortlessly and just sways me into nichkhun's mind. i love the way you portrays them, how their friendship evolves, how nichkhun views himself, his friendship with minjun and his future. throughout the fic the one thing i grasp is (idk if this was ypur purpose hahah my brain is kinda weird somehow but yeah xD) hope. and i like that very much.
so thankyou for popping my khunkay cherry xD and thankyou for such a well written story. <333