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fic: i know you will, i know you well

Nov 13, 2007 00:53

i know you will, i know you well by Beezus
Pete/Patrick | NC-17 | 3,600+ words

( and my sweet darling, take my hand )

2007, falloutboys, fictions by beezus

Comments 31

kooku4u November 15 2007, 01:08:23 UTC

i love first time slash.
this was great, well thought out, descriptive, and oh yeah

HOT!!!

you win.

chebonne November 15 2007, 10:55:46 UTC

This was... yeah. Gotta love them, Pete is so fucked up (I'm manfully restraining from making a bad pun here, I just want you to know). Lovely and very, vey hot.

Small nitpick: the course hair that surrounds his cock. I think you mean "coarse".

adellyna November 15 2007, 16:33:24 UTC

Oh, this was beautiful, and I'm every bit as in love with it as Pete is with Patrick. <333333

runner_bean November 15 2007, 22:56:57 UTC

Pete shrugs, smirk firmly in place. Pete reaches out and Patrick is so very confused until he realizes that Pete is trying to pick his nose.

The whole story was great, but pretty much from that point (above) on, it was remarkable.

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runner_bean November 19 2007, 21:47:49 UTC

It's completely Pete. The boy has some type of gross-bodily-function fetish.

vivilicious November 16 2007, 22:03:04 UTC

awwwwwwww... I love this so much! <3333333333333333