Edna, dahling, if you're going to use rhyme and attempt a rhythm in the first stance, then please try to keep the same rhythm and rhyme throughout the piece.
The innuendo and use of familiar folk tales is clever, but I don't have to like how she chose to express it. -_-;
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The innuendo and use of familiar folk tales is clever, but I don't have to like how she chose to express it. -_-;
/poetry snob
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