two ficlets!

[rizzyr]

OMG! My first ever United fics. *bites nails nervously* Here's hoping they're as good as the ones everyone else writes. :) And I think I got all the tags.....there were a lot.

Title: This Feeling

Pairing: Rio/Vida

Rating: PG (for any language and/or implications)

Disclaimer: Obviously they don’t belong to me.....if they did, I’d lock them up and never

Comments

[kobean]

I JUST WANT TO SAY: IM FIRST.

*reads*

[kobean]

OMG THE RIO/VIDA ONE WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTWARMING. i love it very much. but i must say, teh second one just owns me. the cuteness and the funny from everyone - just all perfect. i think you have the banter and the boys down. and i can't believe this is your first fic! sldnfsdklgn. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE. i love it. both of them. completely. and this is going in my mems.

WAZZA THE KITTY. ♥ (god, so cute)!

[rizzyr]

Awww yayz!! I'm so glad you liked these!! To get a comment from you is awesome b/c I just adore your writing oh so much. :) *dances*

(I'm really glad you think I got the boys and the banter down.....I was so nervous about that part. *wipes sweat off brow*)

Kitty!Wazza is now going to be my new favorite thing.....for like the rest of the night until I find something new. LOL

[rizzyr]

Thanks so much for the awesome comment!! :)

I was worried about the banter and really tried to do Vida and Ronnie's accents in my head with their accents so it sounded real. Thank you for saying that it actually worked!! Woot.

[petarrr]

Awwww! The Rio/Vida one was just lovely. Every time i read that pairing i get so incredibly happy. Thank you.

[rizzyr]

I've heard that you're the one that loves Rio/Vida the most. Heee! So, thanks so much for the comment! :)

[petarrr]

You have?! Ha ha that is fabulous!

[avaneko]

I really, really like the Rio/Vida one. The just something so satisfying about it! It's beautiful!

The second is so adorable! Wayne and Wazza are small and like to cuddle in Cris's arms.
AWW! AWW! AWW! Like Cris says, that's very cute!

[rizzyr]

Thanks so much!! :) The Rio/Vida just naturally came to me so I'm excited that everyone liked it!

Heee. Wayne is just obviously a cuddler....he may look tough but he secretly loves to cuddle. With Cris of course. *wink wink*

[aeroporto]

Omg the Cris/Wayne one was so adorable!!! Of course, I loved the Rio/Vida one, too, but the idea of Cris naming his kitten after Wayne is very adakdashd.

Loved them :)

[rizzyr]

Thanks!!

I really loved the idea of Cris and the kitten! I was playing with my new kitten today and I just got inspired. And of course it had to be Cris/Wayne!! :)