two ficlets!

[rizzyr]

OMG! My first ever United fics. *bites nails nervously* Here's hoping they're as good as the ones everyone else writes. :) And I think I got all the tags.....there were a lot.

Title: This Feeling

Pairing: Rio/Vida

Rating: PG (for any language and/or implications)

Disclaimer: Obviously they don’t belong to me.....if they did, I’d lock them up and never

Comments

[carameltrap]

So, so adorable! Had me grinning the entire morning. Love the Rio/Vida one but the Cris/Wayne and kitten one is just too cute.

[rizzyr]

Thanks so much!! :) How can you not grin at Cris/Wayne? LOL

[hiro_chan]

I dont think you should have any worry about your writings - especially not in unitedslash fandom anyway :D!

I really like these fics - the Rio/Vida one was lovely and heartwarming and the Cris/Wayne one was so goddamn adorable and cute you should've seen the silly grin on my face *g*. Oh, wazza and wazza!kitten... and the both like to cuddle in Cris arms ♥♥♥!!!!! *melts* I also love the banters between the lads - it made everything flows really well.

You definitely should, should, SHOULD write more. And I hope we'll see more of your work real soon :D!

[rizzyr]

Oh wow!! Thanks so much for the lovely comment! :) I really hope to be writing more soon. I've got one Cris/Wayne fic in the works right now....it's going slowly b/c I stopped writing it to write these two.

I'm really really glad everyone liked kitten!wazza......I'm beginning to really wish I was a kitten so I could cuddle in Cris' arms as well. :D

[alejaboo]

aww kitten!!!! *loves* and how cute is darren and redded wayne
*smooches*

[rizzyr]

Thanks so much!! Wayne blushing is like the cutest image in my head. I just love him! :)

[shandoraz]

Awww kittykittykitty ( xD sorry, I really love cats especially when they're small and cute like my own, and of course like Wazza)

You write really well. The first one was a bit of a different Rio/Vida story than what I've read before and in a good way :D
Even when Vida would reach over, tug his nose, and roll his eyes after he’d made an incredibly stupid joke, he’d feel giddy and light-headed like some stupid school girl.
:DD And you even worked in Cristiano *g* See? He's taking over the world. And fiction.

How I'd love to be inside that locker room that you described. The banter came out as so playfully loving. And I repeat: the KITTY!!! Smudge would've been an awsome name too, but maybe Darren will get his own cat, eh?
Wayne blushing is precious.

I have to get going to my stable shift and take care of horsies. But I will keep my end of the bargain and post my shorties either tonight or tomorrow *meep*

[rizzyr]

Ahhhh! I love cats too! I just got a new kitten two weeks ago so I think he sort of inspired this ficlet for me. :)

Awww, I'm so glad Rio/Vida was different in a good way! *dances* I just adore them so that's awesome. Yes!! Cristiano *IS* taking over the world.....one person and one fic at a time.

Oh no. Darren can not get his own cat for I will be forced to write it and I don't think I could write a *WHOLE* Darren fic. My brain might explode.

I totally expect fic when I get home from work tonight!!! You have to......we must share the loooooove!! LOL

[shandoraz]

Hmm... what time do you get home then? Although, your time zone is probably at least seven hours behind Finland's time... nonono actually I'm all done and am posting them right after going through my new f-list posts :D

[sonnenbluemchen]

Hei!
I've read the Rio/Vida one and like it very much, although they're not a pairing, that I usually read. Its very likable to imagine Rio in such a situation, being madly in love with Vida.

[rizzyr]

I'm so glad you liked the Rio/Vida one....especially since you don't usually read them! :) That's awesome!

(Rio is so not so secretly in love with Vida. We all know it. Hee!!)