you wanna hear about my new obsession? I'm riding high upon a deep depression

[uninformed]

I'm still feeling somewhat braindead, but I was determined to have something post-worthy before the end of the night, and these two have been deemed halfway decent

Comments

[chibifrieza]

First one, last sentence: I'd lose the comma after the "But". Though that could just be me.

I keep walking right through your Kuro/Fai labels. *facepalm*

You do have a way with words, though. I think you're getting better at this, or something. And this is my only Tsubasa icon, and it isn't even really mine, but that's what you get.

[uninformed]

I lost the comma, as I trust your grammar far more than mine ^_^

At least I'm not writing Kuro/Fai porn or anything (and if I do, I put, like, huge signs on it for you).

Thank you! :D

[uninformed]

I am inept.

(and if I do, I WILL put, like, huge signs on it for you.)

[chibifrieza]

I understand and thank you. ^_^

[song_of_silence]

Your recaps of what's going on in the manga (yeah, I peeked) convince me that I have no idea what's going on and therefore have no context from which to comment on things like this. Therefore, I'll just say that I liked them.

[anonymous]

omg! they are so beautiful. i almost didnt want to read the second one for fear of forgetting the first :P

[uninformed]

wow, thank you!! I'm glad you liked them :D

[ekas]

I can't believe I missed these earlier. I love them both so very much.

If I had to pick though, I'll say the first one. I likes the angst.

[uninformed]

heh. You're doing better than I am. I keep reading your fics and then telling myself I'll comment later. Not the best way to do things, I suppose ^_^

I'm glad you liked them :D

[ekas]

Well, since I know you're reading them I'll make sure to continue writing them. ^.^