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unfinishedline

strip down, part two

Jul 22, 2007 13:58

Title: Strip Down
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire.
Rating: NC-17 for sex, canon incest
Status: 2/2. Completed as part of frellingblonde’s fluffy, smutty challenge.
Summary: Peter, Claire, champagne, tickle fights, and stripping. Need I say more? Now with more illicitness, erotic hide-and-seek, and mind reading dirty talk!
Previous part here!I dashed this off ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, fic: strip down, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 28

joanna_484 July 22 2007, 21:41:24 UTC

Excellent follow up! I love the idea of Peter and Claire all dressed up and attending one of Nathan's fancy political galas *sigh* I wish it would happen on the show, too :)

The whole part with Claire teasingly leading Peter to her with her thoughts was amazing! So well done! And then Peter becoming so frustrated that he opens all the doors with his mind... That was a really inspired passage :)

(I like that you managed to sneak Hiro in there, too :))

Super!

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:34:07 UTC

i love them dressed up too! and thanks so much for liking the hiro part. i couldnt resist. the poor boy needs some action on the show.

nayden July 22 2007, 22:06:28 UTC

All coherent thought has left me, that was stunning *thud* The content and insight in it was amazing. Thankies so much *hugs*

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:34:28 UTC

haha, wow. well i am so glad you liked it. thanks for the review!

open_embrace July 22 2007, 23:58:19 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

*now* i understand the concept for "fluffy AND smutty" sooo much better! that was fantabulous! very very cute, very very hot.

also like the POV you used. and the imagery was great :)

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:35:55 UTC

so glad you liked it!

ps i wrote your bday story today...its around 600 words, so not very long. youll get it on your bday!

frellingblonde July 23 2007, 00:49:10 UTC

GUH! That's what I'm talking about. I'd love to read more like this from you. ;)

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:36:58 UTC

smut, much like sex, seems much less difficult the more i do it. lol. i hope it pleased your challenge and your muse!

kastellen July 23 2007, 01:15:45 UTC

Wow, you get a :sigh: AND a :thud: for that one. Which are probably two sounds Peter and Claire made in the upstairs bedroom, come to think of it :-D

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:37:34 UTC

haha! in rapid succession, too, i imagine. thanks for the review!