Comments | unfinishedline: strip down, part two

unfinishedline

strip down, part two

Jul 22, 2007 13:58

Title: Strip Down
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire.
Rating: NC-17 for sex, canon incest
Status: 2/2. Completed as part of frellingblonde’s fluffy, smutty challenge.
Summary: Peter, Claire, champagne, tickle fights, and stripping. Need I say more? Now with more illicitness, erotic hide-and-seek, and mind reading dirty talk!
Previous part here!I dashed this off ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, fic: strip down, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 28

elliesmeow July 23 2007, 02:34:00 UTC

Wow, if that's what we get when Claire wears that dress then we love it too! Dayum that was hot! And I loved the teasing. Thanks so much for posting.

-Ellie

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:38:11 UTC

i love teasing too! im glad you liked!

dragonydreams July 23 2007, 03:58:51 UTC

Oh my Guh! Claire definitely is a tease. But the follow through was worth it. Very, very hot.

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:38:43 UTC

thank you! and thanks for the review!

runawaycherie July 23 2007, 04:15:33 UTC

oh how i miss smut! lol.

bravo missaliceblue!

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:39:14 UTC

thank you thank! and yes, theres just never enough smut, is there?

rtwofan July 23 2007, 17:52:27 UTC

Ooh, very hot =) And I think I caught something too: Isn't Lionel Darby the name of the dude from "I'm Going To Stop Pretending"? Ha! Easter Egg!

Well...I'm pretty sure, hehe.

Anyways, like I said, very very hot and oddly enough, in character. The lead up is so fantastic in both part one AND two. Great job!

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:40:13 UTC

YES!!! YES HE IS!

i thought no one would catch onto that. hahaha. seriously, i hate OC's, so i try to recycle them.

glad that they were in character (a stickler for me) and that you liked it. thanks!

rtwofan July 24 2007, 17:34:00 UTC

Hehe. I think the fact that I caught that speaks volumes about how much I fangirl your work =) That and the fact that I love the name Lionel *shrug*

I hate OCs too, but you do a really good job with them. They're so believable and likeable, like Peter's Hawaiian therapist.

Can't wait till the next update (which I have a feeling is probably already up? I haven't gone to the pairelove main page today)

madcowre July 23 2007, 19:05:52 UTC

Oohhhh this is my new favourite fic!!

Very Hot and totally realistic! :D

sinverguenza July 24 2007, 01:40:36 UTC

haha! wow! what a compliment! so glad you liked it.