Coerce You Into This One

[unconditional_w]

Title: Coerce You Into This One
Author: unconditional_w
Pairing: Katie, Naomi/Emily
Summary: "I think," Katie says slowly, licking her lips and playing with her makeup bottles on the dresser, "I think I'd like to have what you have with her."
Rating: R for language
Disclaimer: Not my universe, not my characters. I just relate to 'em.

Comments

[skuzzeh]

Beautiful.
I do adore vulnerable Katie more than most other characters if not, all of them.

Loved the Naomily interaction too. :)

[unconditional_w]

Thank you, I do as well. Katie's really been cheated on some prime vulnerable moments in the series, and I'm glad it's looking like they'll be addressing them in series 4.
And oh Naomily. They're just flipping adorable, no writer can resist 'em :P
Thank you for all your reads and comment :)

[unconditional_w]

Oh...yeah....no...I haven't...
No...pshhh...no..I haven't already read some of your work...

You know, the truly grand thing about fanfiction is that you can take as much and leave as much as you want from the original series, it's just completely open to interpretation and replacement of things you originally wanted.
It's not tricky at all, just good to practice your own writing. Don't be embarassed of your fics, I quite like your writing (I tend not to comment, because I find it's difficult to find things to say) and really, the only way to improve is to keep practicing and keep at it. So keep at it! :)
Thanks for your comment, as I said before I know it's tough to comment, especially on the ones you like so so much (ironically) or even the ones you're intimidated by. But I appreciate it, and hey, it's good practice!

[displacedaway]

This was beautiful. I really don't think there's a word more apt to describe it than simply beautiful. I love the way your portrayed Katie's longing - for her relationship with her sister, for the type of relationship that Emily is fortunate enough to have with Naomi.

It's refreshing to see Katie's point of view and your characterization of her insecurity was spot on.

[unconditional_w]

Thank you! I don't really think Katie's the sad sort of character that she's sometimes portrayed as, just someone who really longs for something, or someone. In that sense I guess I just think she's a little empty, and is always trying to fill herself with emotion, but can't quite grasp genuine emotions.
I'm really glad you enjoyed this, so thank you for your read and comment :)

[rock_whirlpool]

ooh now im curious for what emily said...

[unconditional_w]

Haha, unfortunately, what happens between two sisters stays between two sisters.
FitchLove <3

Thanks for your read and comment :)

[rock_whirlpool]

lol. i take that to mean that you dont know and you just typed in random letters that sounded kinda like they might be words?

[unconditional_w]

Psha, I could never tell you.
No, I actually did have a sentence there, but then realized Speaking Twin is definitely what Emily would've done. So *then* I just sort of..morphed around the words :P

[puffy_wuffy]

>"Without the use of an actual rock."

:) Katie and Emily is love . . . but sisterly not anything else. :)

[unconditional_w]

Aren't they just <3
And yes. Um. Twincest is just a no. Just no. Don't anybody expect me to write about that :P Although I do take my hats off to those who can write it. Maybe they're only children. Because I honestly can't even imagine incest, it's just too too difficult.
Thank you for your reads and comments! :D