television static

May 24, 2010 00:19

television static  [Sungmin/Ryeowook]  pg13/angst
{ Sungmin meets Ryeowook in the schoolyard. AU. }
for remixied who is the g to my sparrow. *_*

they want him to get married and have pretty grandchildren. )

p: ryeowook/sungmin, b: super junior, r: pg-13, g: angst

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parodying May 24 2010, 04:36:06 UTC
I KNOW SUNGMIN BUT IDK WHO THE SHIT RYEOWOOK IS BUT WHY IS YOUR WRITING SO PRETYY AHHHHHHH

/BREAKS STUFF

i'm pretty much in love with you, can you tell. D:

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unactivist May 24 2010, 19:14:20 UTC
D: WHY ARE YOU READING SUPER JUNIOR. LOL.

/JOINS YOU

that's works out perfect with me loving you and all. ♥

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13fireflies May 24 2010, 04:47:46 UTC
DSAGJASLJGLAKSJLAKSJDGASD SUNGWOOK IS PRECIOUS~~ ♥

At the beginning i thought they weren't going to be together but then Sungmin told his mother to go fuck herself, in nicer terms of course, and i squealed and jumped and now i'm happy :DDDDD

/clings

i don't care if they are selfish or possessive or wrong, as long as they are TOGETHER.

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unactivist May 24 2010, 19:14:57 UTC
LSKDJFLSKDJFSDFJSD IFKR

/pets

more minwook needs to be written. :'D

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seneferia May 24 2010, 05:13:33 UTC
I loved this. There needs to be more Sungwook in the world there is far too little.

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unactivist May 24 2010, 19:15:11 UTC
i agree. :(

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konzatsu May 24 2010, 05:41:16 UTC
i don't usually like 2nd person pov but it worked really well for this. i love how sungmin's the unsure one and ryeowook is the one that knows what he wants. overall i thought the entire thing was lovely. :)

*mems*

as a side note, the formatting goes a little odd in places with the indentions not matching. i know for me at least it'd be easier to read if the paragraphs were together as opposed to the lines being all double-spaced, but that's me being used to webstandard.

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unactivist May 24 2010, 19:16:28 UTC
it's been so long since i used 2nd person pov so your comment makes me feel a little less insecure.

tyvm. ♥♥

tbh, i think it's something to go with the way i indent in Word, so yeah. it's been bothering me for a long time now. :((

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hitoricrow May 24 2010, 06:24:32 UTC
awww. this is love!
haato!

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unactivist May 24 2010, 19:16:49 UTC
:) thanks for reading.

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