[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 5)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or leaping from one rock to another without

Comments

just don't break our heart ....

[thucdsp]

Everything you want to write ,just write it out,please don't try to come in my dream with the bikini *__________*,I need my head clear to read your up date ,your story.....^__________^.I always always love your JAEMIN ,our JAEMIN,please up date soon.

[umeboshi_heart]

yeah it's a long story xD

thanks for reading! *hugs* xD

[one_milky_smile]

me claim a spot *looks around*

[one_milky_smile]

OMG eighteen years old Jae? 7 years had past??? what happened in seven years???? What did you do to my Minnie??? what did you turn JaeJae into????? OMG!!!!!! *desperate cries*

I read this chapter yesterday night and it made me so confuse so I decided to comment today. I read it again in sane mind and I'm still confusing!!!!

Seriously, what did you do?????? me want to know now now NAOO~~~~ *rip hair out my head and then yours*

The way Jae acted is a little bit........ Did he do that to distract himself from Minnie? plz say it's Minnie, If it was Yunho, I'm gonna cryyyyyyyyyy. And he even said Min ruining him!! what happened to them in that orphanage????

And btw, damm the text message for ruining Jaemin moment!!!!! *curses in every languages*

update more!!!! Angst is never my favorite type of fanfic but I'm still reading them *sighs* If you made this an angst with happy-ending, I would kiss you and dance waka waka with u in bikini toooooooo P/S: Somehow, I get the feeling that Changmin's tattoo, the text message, the way

[umeboshi_heart]

Noo!III MY HAAIIIRR!!!! *yank u back and dwell in bitchfit*

HAHAHA what happened with them is the storyline, how can I tell u nowwww!!! >D *evil*

oh and Can u tell me what makes u confuse? Is it the story or the way I narrate it? Because I just realized that I made Minnie sounded like he read the message outloud! (which he didn't, Jae don't know the message) ... ive fixed it but u know, I was like MAMA I FAAAIIILLEEEDDD MUHUHUHUHU

it won't be a sad ending but it's not a perfect ending xDD hahaha

hihihihihi u won't believe how much I love thoughtful readers. Because im not thoughtful, if I read fanfic with so much questions I'd be like "AHAAAA DIFFICUUULLT DON'T WANT TO tHIIINNK" so I love thoughtful readers! xD

[one_milky_smile]

I'm confuse abt what happened in those 7 years. But SOMEONE rold me that is the storyline so I can't get my answer *sighs* oh and I know Jae don't know the text message. The only thing I don't know is what's in your mind~~~~~

Min's still afraid of fire *sighs* that whiny kid is soooooo still inside himmmmmm

See! Now you're making me confuse even more abt that not-a-perfect-ending!!! To calm my head down, I decide to go and see Minnie's new pic~~~~~ harry porter and so many damm fine pics~~~~~~

me thoughtful *giggles*

[adorable_hotaru]

SPOT

[adorable_hotaru]

many things on my mind with this chapter... Jaejong said Changmin ruining him, Changmin's phobia of the violent, the text message, the brushing teeth to remove Jaejong's trace/taste, the bottom right foot tattoo

[umeboshi_heart]

WHOA!!!!!!!!! I should give you a trophy for such deep thought and awesome comments and speculation!! xD

oh I can only tell you this, first, min's phobia isn't related to the text message. He had it since he was a little, remember? It wouldn't make a plot, only a trait of him, but I hope you could configure why it happened hehehe xD but if you couldn't it's no problem

Second, Jae didn't read the text message so yeah, he didn't know...

your speculations are awesome btw xD

OMG ILU for such fullhearted comment *KISS* xDD

[adorable_hotaru]

I like analyzing/guessing stuffs.. and most of the time the idea just randomly pop up in my head at random time at random place when I didn't do anything remotely close to the idea... like when I read art history or math homework, they just pop in my head... XD my though can be weird and random sometime ^_^

[umeboshi_heart]

hehehehe evrything will be cleared later on deaarrr

oh!! yes! prepare to meet me in your dream xD

thanks for reading!