[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 5)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or leaping from one rock to another without

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[adorable_hotaru]

many things on my mind with this chapter... Jaejong said Changmin ruining him, Changmin's phobia of the violent, the text message, the brushing teeth to remove Jaejong's trace/taste, the bottom right foot tattoo.

I have a feeling that the text message, Changmin brushing teeth to remove Jaejong's trace/taste, and CHangmin's phobia is somehow relate. The text message to Changmin sound a little commanding despite the "sweetheart, I miss you" at the end because don't people usually asking before hand if the person is free to meet up before telling the time and date like he have to be there and no question ask. And maybe whoever text him is possesive of him hence why the whole removing JJ's trace? because he didn't want to but he have to "Guilt filled him but he didn’t have any choice"? and I don't know why I think Changmin's phobia relate to the person, because Jaejong doesn't feel hate or freak out about Min meeting whoever text him 'cause if that person hurt him he wouldn't let him go or maybe he didn't know?... he might have a rough time at the orphanage? Or maybe JJ did it to him (before) when he drunk or something when he "delusional" that Changmin ruining him...? maybe relate to his ex-boyfriend Keita?

CHangmin tattoo at the bottom of his heel make me worry... is it his time almost over? or he have to get Jaejong love before that tattoo disappear in order to stay as he is now? or the time when Junsu come to get his compensation for his help?

Too much speculates... I'll just wait for ur updates to find out more ^_^.... but I'm glad that they still together AND Changmin get use to the human world, though I wish in more gentle way then in orphanage. Orphanage is not a fun place to grow up, too many "not nice though and treatment" people have at that place... whenever problem arise and an orphan/foster care children link to, people tense to blaming them... PLEASE UPDATE SOON... I'm dying to find out what happen next and in the past >.

[umeboshi_heart]

WHOA!!!!!!!!! I should give you a trophy for such deep thought and awesome comments and speculation!! xD

oh I can only tell you this, first, min's phobia isn't related to the text message. He had it since he was a little, remember? It wouldn't make a plot, only a trait of him, but I hope you could configure why it happened hehehe xD but if you couldn't it's no problem

Second, Jae didn't read the text message so yeah, he didn't know...

your speculations are awesome btw xD

OMG ILU for such fullhearted comment *KISS* xDD

[adorable_hotaru]

I like analyzing/guessing stuffs.. and most of the time the idea just randomly pop up in my head at random time at random place when I didn't do anything remotely close to the idea... like when I read art history or math homework, they just pop in my head... XD my though can be weird and random sometime ^_^

[adorable_hotaru]

I remember Jae said he saw a soul in the river (a.k.a Changmin XD) when he in his "the Little One pixy" form) and I believe he can sense or see spiritual thing like how he saw the fox when they in invisible mode. He said he read in some book that "if you died and refused to accept it, your soul will stay in the place where you die". Maybe Changmin DID die there... and other pixies also said he strange and different for a pixy, and speculate maybe he one them THEM (a.k.a human).

So I guess maybe he was a human boy and die in the stream/river and stuck there as a pixy cause he refuse to accept he die, hence the attachment/lingering to human world, the curious and the somewhat human thinking and feeling. It possible that when he was human, he may have a bad experienced with fire... his house burn that kill his family and himself (but he able to ran to the river and die there?)? or watch him or someone close die/hurt in/by the fire? or maybe he play by the river and there are fire and he can't escape (maybe because he was young) and die in the river? or while him as a pixy and he saw the dangerous of fire?

Or maybe not him but the BODY that he in? Even the body contain his soul, but the previous owner might have bad experienced with it and the body (muscle/nerve) remember it?

Or maybe something to with with the fox... animal tense to be afraid of fire... since he there because of fox power, he might react to it?

WAH too many possibilities T.T

[umeboshi_heart]

you speculations is accepted hehehe xD yeah, jae is kinda sensitive about spiritual thingie, and if Min was indeed human boy I also think that min's phobia to fire is related to his previous life, and why he stayed in the water

But I won't make it clear, because in this story he's an unknown creature, I leave the decision to readers what he was, but *whisper*yeahwhatyousaidisthesameaswhatishthought*

and no, min is not pixy. He lived with the Pixies, but what he always asked to them is "what am I, how do I look?"

So, even Min didn't know what he was, he thinks too much while jae could easily know what he was

[adorable_hotaru]

I though Min read the message out loud XD.... but I'm highly think Changming brushing his teeth BECAUSE of the text message... the sender... is there any chance it Junsu? "“My name is Xiah. Remember that. For now you can enjoy your new life, and I will come to you for the bribe one day.” Then a pair of human lips landed on his cheek." Maybe he dad something for that human body? Minnie must have know what the tattoo is by now (if his reaction is frustration at the tattoo) and he didn't check the tattoo at THAT time for nothing. If he know what the tattoo is for, that mean he MUST have meet with Junsu already... so there are chance that the one sent the text is him... maybe? XDDD

[umeboshi_heart]

lol i think i should make the ::::: more xD about the sender and the tatoo, u'll know soon in the next chapter xD

[umeboshi_heart]

oh, Changmin didn't phobia to the violence, it simply because of the lighter. I guessed you missed the part where he hates fire in the prev chapter! Remember? kissing-kissing in the bed? xD

[adorable_hotaru]

the kissing-kissing in bed HELL YEAH I remember that part, the fire thingy... yah... I totally forgot about that part XD...

[adorable_hotaru]

btw... did u see Minnie photoshoot for W Korea (with Yunho)? XD

http://twitpic.com/2gj88u (this officially my fav pic of him KYAAA~ Max Potter - he look like someone attending royal academy LOLS)) He is DAMN FINE in this one (currently my desktop wallpaper muse tehe)

http://twitpic.com/2gjafx

[umeboshi_heart]

yeah I saw that and IM SO DEAD MEAT xDDDD

damn it >_