Full Circle (TezuRyo)

Jul 08, 2007 00:25



When Echizen walks out onto Court no.2, the grass is soft and slightly damp from the rainstorm earlier that day, which broke out too suddenly for the court to be covered up in time to avoid the water. The rain has stopped falling now, although from the looks of it, the reprieve might not last longer than an hour.

It’s the second time ( Read more... )

prince of tennis, fic, pillarchallenge, tezuryo

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mimineko_chan July 8 2007, 20:18:24 UTC
I'm just sooooooooooooo HAPPY ! Everyone is writing wonderful, just wonderful fics !!!! XDDDDD

This fics was just too good ! Your best one yet ! And I'm sure you will keep writing great fics and getting better and better ! You have to keep going, the sky is the limit ! XP FLY !

I just kept laughing all the way ! And just imagining Ryoma as Fuji's little brother ! HAHAHAHA ! Yuuta must be quite happy that his aniki as another "victim" !

And are you sure Eiji couldn't put that dress ??? That would make Oishi quite happy, ne ? And did the gang bet on who would win ? And what's the loser going to do ? XP

Giving you lots and lots of LOVE !

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umarekawareru August 6 2007, 12:45:20 UTC
OMG I love you so much. I do agree this is my best yet, and what you said after that (And I'm sure you will keep writing great fics and getting better and better ! You have to keep going, the sky is the limit ! XP FLY !) had me grinning ALL DAY. I swear, I must've looked stupid, walking around the place grinning like a Cheshire cat XD XD THANK YOU!!

Hahahahaha oh Yuuta! We all know he loves his brother deep inside. But I can totally imagine Fuji proclaiming Ryoma his "little brother" (even more after he starts dating Nanako-chan HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS.)

God yes, I can totally see Eiji in pink frills while Oishi blushes to the roots of his hair. AND THEN FUJI PUSHES THEM INTO A CLOSET, SHOUTS "HAPPY UNBIRTHDAY, OISHI!" AND SHUTS THE DOOR HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Should I write that. I think I should XD XD

Lots of love back to you! <3333

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mimineko_chan August 6 2007, 18:20:18 UTC
I thought that the title was familiar... But I couldn't stop laughing (inside 'cause I'm at work) even through I know how it would end.

Again, this was too freaking good. I envy KC-Evans... ^_^ I want a birthday fic too (My b-day is next sunday)... XD

I've been really depressed lately 'cause of the latest chapter. I'm still in my own world where Tezuka is unbeatable (well maybe except Ryoma).
I guess that it's the raining here that it's making me sad...

But reading this fic again made me smile. Don't stop writing 'cause we need lots and lots of pillar love !!!

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umarekawareru August 26 2007, 11:21:19 UTC
God, Happy birthday. I will totally write you something, although of course it's going to be eons late *facepalms* Sorry I missed it! ♥

And I know, I keep getting so :( everytime Tezuka's injury starts giving trouble. YOU TOOK HIM AWAY FROM RYOMA FOR WHAT, I ASK. He should be completely healed and playing and awing everyone with his prowess XD But you know what, even if he never heals completely, Ryoma will be there. (For some reason, I have been humming the song Sexual Healing all day long which, I'm sure, is one of Fuji's favourites.)

Would you like Pillar Pair for your fic? Or should I try my hand at a different pairing? ♥

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venivincere July 8 2007, 22:57:11 UTC
Wow. This is very well done. I love how you've characterized Fuji and Ryoma's relationship, and how scary is it that Nanako's sweet on Fuji? I yearn for Tezuka to come back and take the title from Ryoma. Very nice story!

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umarekawareru August 6 2007, 12:56:17 UTC
I really enjoyed writing their interactions, and I think Ryoma agrees about that Nanako bit XD Tezuka will definitely come back. Thank you so much for this lovely review!

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poilass July 9 2007, 20:28:11 UTC
JUMPS UP AND DOWN IN GLEE!

I love tezu-ryo-fuji friendship fics! And Fuji/Nanako!

A lot of shippy fic excludes all the other relationships, like nothing could ever be as important as THE ONE TRUE LOVE, and I love that you totally don't do that; Fuji and Atobe, and all their other friendships, and Ryoma calling his mum, and it's all important, they're all important to each other.

I feel all warm and happy now!

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umarekawareru August 6 2007, 13:04:46 UTC
Fuji/Nanako, yes please! Do you know any good fics with that pairing? Please pimp them to me, I'm craving that ship right now soooo much!

No man is an island, right? No matter how strongly I ship TezuRyo, I think they are not the only thing in PoT - there's all the other characters too, interacting and carrying on with their own lives, their own dilemmas and their own decisions that may or may not build plot but, ultimately, they all influence each other and form a net that can't be broken - friendship. I feel there's such a strong notion of that in PoT, and I'm really glad I managed to do it justice :)

Thank you so much! <3 Lovely icon, btw.

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jade_peace July 9 2007, 22:54:14 UTC
I <3 this!

Fuji was lovely.
“Fuji,” he says immediately, looking shocked. “You taught him manners.”

Sweet and cute and there were..FRIENDSHIPS!

Thank you very much. Fuji/Nanako made me o.O, but I guess it could work. And you kept Fuji playing tennis! I would like Fuji to develop more interest in tennis everywhere. And Atobe. Oh. My. Gawd. Atobe. Does Ryoma need to pay him? He has enough money. xD

Awesome job! ^___^ YAY!

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umarekawareru August 6 2007, 13:16:13 UTC
I was on the verge of cutting that line, you know. But I'm so glad you liked this! I really enjoyed writing Fuji.

Friendship was what I wanted to be one of the themes of this fic, and I'm really glad it showed. Fuji/Nanako, Ryoma would go mad! I would really love to see fic for that XD Fuji should definitely develop more interest for tennis, he's got so much talent and it's really sad that he doesn't have enough love for the game to continue with it :/ Atobe pwns all, doesn't he?

Does Ryoma need to pay him? He has enough money. xD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Good question XD

Thank you so much <333

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kc_evans July 10 2007, 03:19:04 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAGH! You wrote me a birthday fic! I could just hug and love you to death ( ... )

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umarekawareru August 6 2007, 15:20:03 UTC
I AM THE HAPPIEST MOM ON THE PLANET.

I'm soooo glad that you liked your birthday fic!!! And the dialog! I tried my best to make it flow smoothly, and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it. A testament to my talent. I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO DO. THAT WHOLE PARAGRAPH IS MEANT TO MAKE ME BLUSH ISN'T IT. WELL IT'S WORKING. XD

God I know. I was in England, sitting in a café, and a guy came to ask if he could take one of the spare chairs, and I was like "Yes, but please tell me Nadal won Wimbledon." He told me "Nope, sorry, Federer did." I was like FUCK. He must have thought I was funny, he was laughing so much. I can totally see Atobe being Ryoma or Tezuka's manager in the future, if he doesn't turn pro himself. In this fic they've had to interact for a long time, so I thought it would make sense for them to be relaxed around each other, as opposed to how they bicker and compete against each other in Junior High/High School fics. The fic was closer than you can imagine to being FujiRyo, I don't know how I ( ... )

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kc_evans August 7 2007, 03:21:04 UTC
MY BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY FIC AGAIN! DID I MENTION HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS? CAUSE I DO EVEN MORE LOTS THAN BEFORE.

(haha, my grammar has gone down the tube in the month you were away)

I was not trying to make you blush, I was merely telling the truth! And actually, rereading my comment, it didn't even say half the things I wanted to mention so just know that my awe is more than what I wrote. Ironically, I can't put into words how I felt as I read the fic. That is ... rather sad, actually.

I will not say anything about Federer winning Wimbledon because he is a ... oops, I said I wouldn't say anything, right? Anyway, I'm glad you had the same reaction as I did about that game. Pfft.

Btw, welcome back! Hope you had fun! Did you buy lots of shiny, pretty things for me, your only daughter?? :D

Can't wait for your email, either! We'll talk soon!

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