Comments | ultra_chrome: Prompt #16. Rock and Roll

ultra_chrome

Prompt #16. Rock and Roll

Apr 25, 2007 00:11

Title: Rock’n’roll Epiphany.
Pairing: F/K
Rating: PG
Word Count: 686
Notes: Finally back in the saddle!!! Fraser watches Ray doing the dishes….

( Fraser had learned a few things over the past few years )

kowalski, fraser, rating:pg, slashfic, due south

Comments 22

k1p2psso April 24 2007, 16:46:53 UTC

This is lovely imagery - a quiet moment of detente.

You might want to change the word taught to taut, though.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:49:47 UTC

Thank you for spotting that. All changed now. :)

mickeymvt April 24 2007, 17:30:19 UTC

Ray dancing IS a thing of beauty.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:50:14 UTC

Indeed it is! ;)

capella_fic April 24 2007, 19:03:55 UTC

Ooh - now there's a fabulous last line. Mmmm! You've left the best kind of image in my head, so thank you.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:52:16 UTC

You're welcome. Always happy to instill dirty thoughts. Nice to know I managed it. :D

spuffyduds April 24 2007, 20:09:49 UTC

Oh, yes, exactly with the loud! If it's loud enough, you can be actually INSIDE of it. Well done.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:53:26 UTC

That's it!!! I wish I could have said it that well....

Thanks :)

leafy22 April 24 2007, 20:20:35 UTC

Oh, I hate washing the dishes so I'm going to think about this fic the next time I have to do them!

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*stands staring into space next to pile of still-unwashed dishes with hands in bowl of cold, soapy water*

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:54:52 UTC

Uh...is dancing Ray really a safe thing to be thinking of while handling cutlery?

Still, if it makes the job bearable... :)