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Prompt #16. Rock and Roll

Apr 25, 2007 00:11

Title: Rock’n’roll Epiphany.
Pairing: F/K
Rating: PG
Word Count: 686
Notes: Finally back in the saddle!!! Fraser watches Ray doing the dishes….

( Fraser had learned a few things over the past few years )

kowalski, fraser, rating:pg, slashfic, due south

Comments 22

bluebrocade April 24 2007, 21:01:25 UTC

OMGGUH. *fans self*

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:55:22 UTC

Yay!! Thank you kindly!

captainlogic April 24 2007, 21:15:36 UTC

Excuse me while I mini-wave in celebration of return. And what a return, with a pinch of smutty goodness. Loved the imagery of the sweats bunching and releasing around Ray's ass (and I thank you for it). Very lovely!

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:58:17 UTC

aww shucks! You do say the sweetest things.

Maybe you could tell your boys that scoring TWO empty netters is like rubbing salt into the wound and is not buddies? But damn they played well!

Argh...they play the Ducks next???

captainlogic April 25 2007, 22:18:14 UTC

See, I had to be good when I emailed you as you said you were gonna support the Ducks and iwas already of the knowledge that my boys would be playing them.....
I sneered at a guy in a Ducks shirt today. I was in my jersey so he understood. Everyone around us were a little......concerned? What can I say? If you dont like hockey you dont understand. Woest me for living in a country where football is a religion. But soon to decamp to where hockey is life. Much better!

ultra_chrome April 28 2007, 14:38:06 UTC

Ha! You want to see football as a religion? Come to Australia. It's beyond ridiculous...

I get game 2 early tomorrow morning...\O/

sharon28 April 24 2007, 22:46:24 UTC

Oh this is lovely. I really enjoyed it.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 14:59:22 UTC

Thanks so much. I think Fraser did too. :p

vsee April 25 2007, 11:40:20 UTC

Wish I could be more coherent, but all I've got is a great big YUM for dancing Ray and his great ass. Thanks for a gorgeous mental picture.

ultra_chrome April 25 2007, 15:00:36 UTC

Hehehe, well imagine how hard it was trying to write while I was picturing it....

Thanks for the kind words. :)

snarkyducky April 29 2007, 13:45:02 UTC

It was beautiful. Wild and free in a way Fraser had always instinctively known Ray to be.

this is a beautiful story.. i love this understated sense of intimacy..
thank you for sharing this ♥

ultra_chrome May 2 2007, 09:02:38 UTC

Thank you for reading it. :)
And even more for commenting.