my boy builds coffins
MY BOY BUILDS COFFINS
oneshot, 4132 words, PG-13
dark fluff (?) and bittersweet angst
myungzy
( Three boys were inside the car but they didn’t last long. But Bae Sue Ji - (“It’s Suzy. Stop calling me by that awful name.”) - was alive when the car filled with muddy water, and she probably felt it burning up her lungs as they failed to cling to every bit of oxygen they could. And then she was eerie and dead, her pale slightly-green skin contrasted with the mortuary table in a certain cruel way. )
oneshot, 4132 words, PG-13
dark fluff (?) and bittersweet angst
myungzy
( Three boys were inside the car but they didn’t last long. But Bae Sue Ji - (“It’s Suzy. Stop calling me by that awful name.”) - was alive when the car filled with muddy water, and she probably felt it burning up her lungs as they failed to cling to every bit of oxygen they could. And then she was eerie and dead, her pale slightly-green skin contrasted with the mortuary table in a certain cruel way. )
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and so delightfully (and terrifyingly) morbid
definitely sent goosebumps up and down my arms
wonderful piece.
:)
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i have a taste for dark broken things, it's kind of an obsession really.
but hopefully you liked it, em? :)))
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i especially loved this
"I never liked that smile because it was almost never directed at me - and because it was ever so often used to drag boys into her pink bedroom (they called it a very different name in secretive whispers across the school halls), like a mermaid that drags men into the ocean with their sweet songs and promises of love, only to kill them later. "
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(i'm gonna cry, pushing daisies + au + myungzy makes mi happy! )
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Little Suzy and I used to play together among rows and rows of beautifully carved coffins, and it was all too morbid but kids rarely notice things like death. And then we grew up, and then - and then she evaporated in thin air, she was gone, and I was left behind with a bunch of obnoxious feelings and questions, Death and its black coffins."you always know how to toy with my dear heart, georgia, you. i love the way this part was phrased, it's gorgeous and matches the flow. "she evaporated into thin air": i love that line! and the whole playing with coffins, you're genius ( ... )
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"The princess from the fairy tales I told to dead children before putting them to sleep for an eternity, sharp edges that left me behind bleeding, the colors on the walls of my house, the haggard girl crying on my doorstep, the nails digging in my skin, the whispers behind closed doors, the caskets, the dancing, the darkness under my skin, shelter, friend, best friend, love."
i really hate you. i really do. i love that line so much UGH. i love this whole fic. you're the best otp soulmate one can ask for.
and i really love the last line.
you toy with me so much because it's everything i've ever wanted and loved into one fic :(
FUCK YOU GEORGIA AND YOUR PERFECT FIC. IT'S GOING INTO MY ALL TIME FAVES.
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and sobbing thank you, nikka! that's such a great compliment, i don't really deserve it.
OH OH AND I THINK MY MYUNGZY FLEET SHOULD JOIN FORCES WITH YOUR CHANGYOON FLEET. CAPTAINS, AYE.
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AND YES OUR SHIPS SHOULD JOIN FORCES. WE WILL RULE THE WORLD WITH OUR OBSESSION FOR ANGST AND DARK FLUFF AND ALL THINGS PRETTY (BECAUSE THE 4 OF 'EM ARE THE VERY DEFINITION)-------
Aye, Captain!
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You write such beautiful myungzy ;; ♥
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that being said, THANK YOU VERY MUCH :'))))
i love writing myungzy, so it's nice to know it's actually readable hahahah thanks!
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