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uljima

i chased your love around a figure 8

Oct 22, 2012 23:58

I CHASED YOUR LOVE AROUND A FIGURE 8
part 1, 6221 words, R
angst/romance/supernatural
myungzy, one-sided myungyeol

( Suzy lives in a white room - a boring one, she reckons. White hospital walls, washed out, once-pink bed sheets, withering flowers dying out on a table, beeping machines that cast a greenish, eerie glow after dark, and of course that everlasting distasteful smell of ether and death. )

type: fanfic, genre: au, pairing: myungsoo/sungyeol, verse: figure 8, pairing: myungsoo/suzy, fandom: miss a, fandom: infinite, genre: dark!fic, ff: het, ff: r

Comments 38

chungmah October 23 2012, 02:25:14 UTC

/dinosaur sounds

uljima October 23 2012, 02:26:14 UTC

idk why but i actually laughed very loud at that

chungmah October 24 2012, 03:34:12 UTC

*______* so chilling. waiting for part 2, georgia! i loved the bit where she took the blood.

chungmah October 24 2012, 03:34:24 UTC

and i'm glad i can make you laugh LOL

harues October 23 2012, 02:54:08 UTC

obama's sassiness can be put on hold, but sleep cannot.
I'LL READ IT TOMORROW BBY SAVE THIS SPOT

uljima October 23 2012, 03:02:02 UTC

GO TO SLEEP BB ♡ the spot is saved for you obvs

harues October 23 2012, 21:45:37 UTC

BB, THIS IS SO TWISTED I LOVE IT
characterization of Suzy is way off, but it suits her completely, for some reason. i think it's the way you were able to bring in her perspective of life even while in third person, and i love it! i could totally see myungsoo being an emo little bastard though. all myungzy fics are so dark and ominous and about sickness and strained relationships, i stg.

Suzy doesn’t believe in Heaven, she believes in a really long sleep.
She was born rotten, she was going to die young.

i love how Suzy is attached to the hospital (even though she hates it and is more attracted to the idea of death) and i have so many complicated feelings i can't articulate completely... although this seems to always happen when i read your fics.

but yes, this fic is pretty (even though it's.... bloody? dark? IT'S PRETTY OK) and i'm waiting for part deux ♥

uljima October 23 2012, 23:15:25 UTC

AWN THANK YOU, MI. :')))))))) your comments never fail to make me happy - especially since you've seen the very first draft of this thing months ago, idek.

oh, Suzy must be off to work, i guess? i mean, she's suffering from dementia after all. i'm glad i could make her character fit, i was a little worried about that. i don't know very well how the disease itself works (i've been studying lmao), and finding ways to explain it without really explaining it is quite tough hahaha. and ofc, myungsoo = emo little bastard jonsnowing all day every day. bless his soul.

i love how Suzy is attached to the hospital (even though she hates it and is more attracted to the idea of death)
i'm super happy this came through, too! it's one of the most important things for this part, and for the conclusion of everything.

it'll be a bit darker and maybe a bit more gorey as we go. JUST SO YOU KNOW. I MEAN. IT'S ME AFTER ALL.

/hugs ♥

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jumons October 23 2012, 05:42:43 UTC

this is my first time reading a myungzy fic, and i'm seriously glad i didn't skip passed it. i'm sure i'll probably looking all over lj for more myungzy fics because of you lol. this is so darn interesting georgia, you have to update soon!

uljima October 23 2012, 16:58:34 UTC

really? awn, i'm honored, then! :) i'm breathing this fanfic, so i guess the second/last part won't take very long! and thank you! ♥

chunsakuma October 23 2012, 06:40:55 UTC

This is beautifully twisted and so interesting! Can't wait for the next part~

uljima October 23 2012, 16:58:57 UTC

twisted is possibly my favorite compliment. THANK YOU! :)

kamanaa October 23 2012, 08:44:15 UTC

myungzy feeeeeels, wah.

somehow the concept kind of reminded me of L.J.Smith's secret vampire.
i love everything about this to bits. especially your writing style. i hope you update soon.

uljima October 23 2012, 16:59:46 UTC

I KNOW. IT HURTS.

ohhh i haven't read that book! is it any good? i have a soft spot for vampire stories.
and thank you so much, it makes me happy to know kdjdf! i will!

kamanaa October 24 2012, 08:04:24 UTC

AND IT HURTS GOOD.

i was going through sort of vampire/werewolf, all things dark phase when i read that book about two years ago. it just reminded me of that cause there was this sick girl and her vamp best friend who decides to save her by changing her. suzy being in hospital sick and all kind of had me thinking about that. i enjoyed it.
and you're welcome. looking forward to it!

uljima October 24 2012, 20:05:05 UTC

YES. #bless

ohhh that sounds actually interesting! i have a thing for twisted sick things, for some odd reason. i'll try to read it! :D