i chased your love around a figure 8

[uljima]

I CHASED YOUR LOVE AROUND A FIGURE 8
part 1, 6221 words, R
angst/romance/supernatural
myungzy, one-sided myungyeol

Comments

[harues]

obama's sassiness can be put on hold, but sleep cannot.
I'LL READ IT TOMORROW BBY SAVE THIS SPOT

[uljima]

GO TO SLEEP BB ♡ the spot is saved for you obvs

[harues]

BB, THIS IS SO TWISTED I LOVE IT
characterization of Suzy is way off, but it suits her completely, for some reason. i think it's the way you were able to bring in her perspective of life even while in third person, and i love it! i could totally see myungsoo being an emo little bastard though. all myungzy fics are so dark and ominous and about sickness and strained relationships, i stg.

Suzy doesn’t believe in Heaven, she believes in a really long sleep.
She was born rotten, she was going to die young.

i love how Suzy is attached to the hospital (even though she hates it and is more attracted to the idea of death) and i have so many complicated feelings i can't articulate completely... although this seems to always happen when i read your fics.

but yes, this fic is pretty (even though it's.... bloody? dark? IT'S PRETTY OK) and i'm waiting for part deux ♥

[uljima]

AWN THANK YOU, MI. :')))))))) your comments never fail to make me happy - especially since you've seen the very first draft of this thing months ago, idek.

oh, Suzy must be off to work, i guess? i mean, she's suffering from dementia after all. i'm glad i could make her character fit, i was a little worried about that. i don't know very well how the disease itself works (i've been studying lmao), and finding ways to explain it without really explaining it is quite tough hahaha. and ofc, myungsoo = emo little bastard jonsnowing all day every day. bless his soul.

i love how Suzy is attached to the hospital (even though she hates it and is more attracted to the idea of death)
i'm super happy this came through, too! it's one of the most important things for this part, and for the conclusion of everything.

it'll be a bit darker and maybe a bit more gorey as we go. JUST SO YOU KNOW. I MEAN. IT'S ME AFTER ALL.

/hugs ♥

[harues]

it's definitely evolved from when i read the draft! i'm really happy with how it turned out, it's very dark.

Suzy w o r k s. and really well! some parts had me confused, because she can remember some of her habits and what happened in her books (and what her favorite idol group is) and she has dementia, but i overlooked it. myungsoo, the little emo bastard with black nails and the eyeliner to match :') he's just missing his long hair and he could fully jon snow everyday.

IT'S YOU, SO DARK AND TWISTED. good luck bb, i can't wait until the ~peter pan let's-go-to-neverland~ kicks in! i want to see how myungsoo's gonna lead the 'lost boys'.

i told you how much i love sungyeol right? BECAUSE I LOVE SUNGYEOL AY PAPI.

/huuuuugs ♥♥♥

[uljima]

sobs, yay! :))))

dementia is quite a complicated syndrome to understand, imo D: there are far too many kinds of symptoms (and behaviour patterns) to work with. suzy has slowly progressive dementia, i've outlined more of less her specific behaviours regarding the illness but since it's basically au, i took the liberty of giving her memories - invented or not - otherwise she'd be an empty shell. also, she's psychotic in a way she'll talk to objects (and remember things that never were, maybe), and sometimes she can't walk (her feet will drag), she's apathetic and not very bright. there's the fact she has been forgotten in a hospital for too long, as well. i don't think i'll write openly about her illness basically because she doesn't quite grasp it herself, but i do hope these small points come across! i think i'll actually talk to a doctor about it, hahaha. we'll see how it goes in /neverland/. ANY ADVICE IS WELCOME PLEASE.

THE LOST BOYS. I LOVE THEM ALL MI. I HOPE YOU'LL DO TOO

[harues]

you're doing perfect with the dementia symptoms already. ♥ that whole transition sequence where Suzy thought she dropped the book on the floor? i loved it, it was creative and it really tied the whole thing together in terms of her illness and personality

[uljima]

i'll be sure to call you on twitter or skype whenever needed. i'm already at neverland (which is not exactly... neverland obviously - BUT YOU'LL SEE) and it's fun fun fun.

the lost boys will be a mix of the 87's movie characters and peter pan's boys ofc. i love the fact that there are actually six lost boys so i can work with all of them. i do think i'll also mix tinker bell and hook with two of them, because of reasons i can't tell just yet.

YOU WILL KNOW. SOON ENOUGH. i'm working on his backstory as we speak. :'))))

AWKWARD-CUTE SCENES ARE COMING FOR YOU AS WELL. AND MORE KISSES OFC. WHAT'S PETER PAN WITHOUT THIMBLES. lots of thimbles! stolen thimbles!

[harues]

jfc, georgia hurry this up! i waited for a month for this one, it better not be a month for part two! aw yay, excited c:

(screams quietly) awww! (is that the right reaction?) but this just made this so much more interesting c': TINKERBELL? HOOK? are they going to be the infinite members or two other people? (screaming for princess nana to be tinker bell)

BACKSTORY, YES GOOD, I'M LIKING WHERE THIS IS HEADED.

GIVE ME THE KISSES, GIVE ME THE EVERYTHING!!! give me the heartbreaking scene at the end where wendy leaves peter too :'c

[harues]

GEORGIA DO IT, I'M GONNA PRESSURE YOU EVERY DAY