061. stumble.

[tyrannicides]

Nam Mellitus Erat, 061. stumble.
Late September.

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[tyrannicides]

my point is i'm actually insane.

I lav you.

In some ways it's so hard to reply to your comments because they are so incredibly nice. It's hard for me to know what to say except "omg thank you" while I silently gleeface in front of my computer about someone being into the things I'm into and liking all the stupid little things I put in there because I'm into them.

the shift of control and power

I THOUGHT THIS EXACT PHRASE. When I first started writing the chapter, it was Cesc getting sick, and then I decided, oh, okay, how cliche would that be, and not at all what I want. Unless there's a shift of power and Cesc can prove in some tangible way that he's not only self-sufficient, but capable of taking care of someone else on his own--that his, I mean, "dependence on" is the wrong word, but his role in his relationship with Iker is a choice. You know. If that isn't there, Iker'd be right for backing off of it, probably.

but i love the idea of pique as a foil to iker?

[bossbadger]

Ooohh! I just replied to your reply on the last chapter, and then I saw the update!

I'm really loving where this is going.

Sorry for the shit comment. It's just amazing, like always. I have to read every chapter four or five times before I'm coherent. :)

[tyrannicides]

No, thank you so much! Your comments are always so nice. :)

[tyrannicides]

Thank you!

[tyrannicides]

You know, that line was a last minute addition that was not in my draft, but I added it as I was posting, I don't know why. I'm glad you liked it, and thank you ♥♥♥.

[lolatweeti]

*incoherent squeeing*
I literally cannot handle the perfection that was that chapter.

I hope a massive "OMFG I love you, please never stop writing Fabsillas" will suffice as a comment, cos it's about all I can manage after reading that.

[tyrannicides]

I will never stop, they are too OTP now. Like, they're edging in on Beckham/Iker--I love them so much.

Thank you. ♥