[Heroes/Men in Black] - "Trigger" {Mr. Bennet}

[typings]

Title: Trigger
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Heroes/Men in Black
Character: Mr. Bennet
Rating: R
Word count: 4,000
Summary: He's awaken by a gunshot and the smoky smell of gunpowder.
Note: Crossover AU. Written before Company Man aired, so no spoilers for that particular episode. Thanks to krisravenna for the beta!
Crossposted: typings, heroes_fic, fanfiction.net.

Comments

[spectacal]

Wow.

See, I usually stay away from crossovers, but I had to check this one out. You've captured the essence of Mr. Bennet perfectly, and the transitions between the present and the past are perfect.

Why am I being all elaborate? Let's make it simple - I LOVED it!

You killed Mr. Muggles! Mr. Muggles!

[the_grynne]

Oh God. That was superb, and creepy.

[shadowhuntress]

Oh my goodness, wow! This is shocking and fantastic. You've seamlessly woven the MiB universe with this one. Such a perfect cross. Oh, and I'm with the other commenter--you killed Mr Muggles! ::shockhorror:: ;-) Thanks so much for sharing this.

[darkfire_blade]

That was amazingly awesome. Here I thought MiB and Heroes was going to be a little weird, but wow you totally did it. The jumps between past and present were nicely done. Wow that was creepy though. Wonder what exactly the aliens wanted...

[bobrhyn]

Okay, well, I'm nicely terrified now! Thank you!

But also, excellent job here. Loved the flashbacks and connections, and when I read the words Angela Petrelli I did a little exhale. Dang. :X