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Jun 14, 2005 22:50

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cavaliershining June 15 2005, 20:49:42 UTC
Hmm... okay, I have a few more things I'd like to poke at the plot with. *nods ( ... )

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romancenovelist June 16 2005, 17:48:39 UTC
If the villain is a street urchin/pickpocket as we've been discussing, if the younger Knights make friends with him, the older ones are going to find out sooner or later. And I can't imagine either Goh or Kei allowing the kids to consort with such a... negative influence.

This could be when the child first starts messing with archetypes, though. Sort of unconsciously making people have a more favourable opinion toward pickpockets/street kids so that he won't lose his new friends.

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cavaliershining June 16 2005, 20:59:25 UTC
That's a good point. *nods* But as Leafe Knights, they might be a little less affected by that particular manipulation... And the way I'm envisioning it, it might also be an important plot element. We'll have to see. ^_^

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splashpuppy June 16 2005, 10:54:56 UTC
A few thoughts on how other characters could notice Ensife disturbances.

It affects memories, we decided right? So Goh could notice people are forgetting things behind at the cafe more often. He could also notice coworkers who never need to write down an order are suddenly forgetting who had what etc.

And since it affects intellect, Kei could notice that progress on the game complany's latest project has slowed to an absolute CRAWL.

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