Comments | tyhyin: The Grief of an Old Man

tyhyin

The Grief of an Old Man

Apr 30, 2009 09:34

He undresses and gets into bed, moves onto the left side of the bed and puts his left arm above his head. “Run simulation one, please,” he says to the room.

“Yes, Doctor McKay,” it replies.

Then he's there behind him with his right arm around his waist and left hand in his just like it once was. He knows every movement, every response and ( Read more... )

slash, sga, beckett_mckay, stargate atlantis

Comments 7

jayel_fox April 30 2009, 09:49:19 UTC

Wow, that was pretty sad and touching. Thank you for sharing.

PS - You might want to go and double-check your warnings on mckay_beckett. I did think McKay teaching psychics was kind of funny though... ;)

tyhyin April 30 2009, 10:22:27 UTC

oops
danke theres no humour in that lol
im glad you kinda like it
:D

jayel_fox April 30 2009, 10:48:06 UTC

You're welcome. :)

ariadne83 May 1 2009, 06:00:36 UTC

This is really moving, and I don't usually read a lot of McKay/Beckett. It's sad the way the people of Atlantis slowly fell apart, and Lorne in particular really got to me.

tyhyin May 1 2009, 16:44:15 UTC

is moving good?
danke anyway
:D

fififolle May 9 2009, 07:41:06 UTC

Oooops! Sorry I missed the 'psychics' :D *headdesk*
It's a very sad story, but a wonderful idea, well done.

You should put stuff under cuts so that it's easier to follow your journal, check this out - http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=75

I am getting nowhere with Danny/Connor :( I'm sort of writing lots of birthday fics now :)

tyhyin May 10 2009, 11:14:08 UTC

danke for the link
nd yh im kinda at a stalemate with it
got other things to deal with
:D