fic: With Friends Like These (Ander Herrera/?, Iraizoz/Muniain, Llorente/Martínez, NC-17)

[txorakeriak]

Title: With Friends Like These… (1/2)
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Athletic Club Bilbao
Pairing: Ander Herrera/?, Gorka Iraizoz/Iker Muniain, Fernando Llorente/Javi Martínez
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very

Comments

[liberta]

I'm still at the part where Fernando tells Ander to stay away from Javi, but I already know what's up (my middle names are "Sherlock" and "Holmes" ok), and now I need to refrain from drinking orange juice while reading on, because spitting it all over ones keyboard in amusement is not a good thing. I love this, and I'm glad I've read only a bit of it so I can go on and read more right now. Heh.

[txorakeriak]

Heheheh, you are indeed very clever. XDDD And no, your keyboard definitely wouldn't thank you if you got orange juice all over it. XDD I am very pleased you enjoyed this so much!!

[just_jenni]

Agh, I read Part 2 before I read Part 1! Hahahaha...it's 6 am and I haven't had anything to eat yet, or my coffee. But it's okay...I still enjoyed this hilarious first chapter just as much as if I had read it in the proper order!

You have such an amazing attention to detail (I know, I said that before) and the way you can write about so many characters at once and intertwine them all so incredibly well is amazing, but so delightful to read!

I love the inclusion of Fer and Javi, and Gorka! Gorka is amazing...I would never have thought to pair him with Iker, but it works! It works amazingly well...they are an intriguing pairing.

This was a great read, and again, thanks for the fascinating footnotes! I love all the different nicknames.

This club is so very special, and you've helped to make that very clear in the most delightful way!♥

[txorakeriak]

OH MY GOD!!!! *major flailing* My reading experience would have been completely ruined if I had read part 2 before part 1! I can't believe anything made sense the way you read it!! (But I vaguely remember you telling me that you read the last few chapters of books first, so I suppose you're used to this? XD)

Thanks so much for all the compliments, I'm really really glad that I haven't completely lost my ability to write just yet! :) And I'm also glad to hear that I managed to do those awesome guys and the absolutely fantastic club justice! :D

THANK YOU!! *glomp*

[just_jenni]

LOL. My LJ is set to show the most recent entries FIRST, so I'm always scrolling down to the earlier entries. I'm used to doing things in this ass-backwards way, so it doesn't bother me. And YES! I do have this obsessive-compulsive need to read the last chapters of books before the end! XDDDDD

You're welcome! :)♥

[txorakeriak]

Btw:

I would never have thought to pair him with Iker, but it works!
O____O They are like the most obvious ever!!

First there is this:

[elizaberglund]

Oh! That's amasing! Both parts actually! I've seen the "bakalao" videos an dit is hilarious! Does "bakalao actually mean anything or is it just his way to say "yoopeeee!"

[txorakeriak]

Thank you! :D José Iragorri is made of win - I wish I could listen to his match commentary instead of the crap that usually comes with streams!! XD "Bacalao" means "codfish", as a lot of "typical" Vizcayan dishes feature this type of fish. I suppose the idea to say this when Athletic score is because Athletic is the Vizcayan club. ;)

[elizaberglund]

hahahahahahahaha So when Fer scores he is basicly shouting "codfish codfish codfish codfish codfish Llorente codfish codfish codfish codfish" ... This guy is amasing!

[txorakeriak]

Well, he's shouting "codfish codfish codfish codfish codfish codfish codfish codfish by Fernando PEAR, IT'S THE PEAR Llorente". XD "Madari" means "pear" in Euskera/Basque. ;)

[txorakeriak]

Wow, what a kind comment!! Thank you so so so much! I'm especially ecstatic about the fact that you read this even though you're not familiar with the players! It's a great honour! :) And your comment made perfect sense, don't worry! *hugs* Thanks a ton for the compliments! They made me blush a bit but I really appreciated them! :)