fic: Invitation (Martín Demichelis/Martín Cáceres, NC-17)

[txorakeriak]

Title: Invitation
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Málaga CF/Sevilla FC
Pairing: Martín Demichelis/Martín Cáceres
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended.

Comments

[sheep_emilia]

OMG!!!
Where do I even begin?!
First of all, Martín Cáceres!!! YES!!! (As in, yes, please, can I have some more?!) God, so glad you wrote them!
Second, oh, the HOTNESS! I don't blame Martín for feeling hot - I feel quite hot all over myself.
And oh dear, such an incredibly hot sex, I can't even...
You're a genious, but that's hardly new ;)

[txorakeriak]

Martín Cáceres is horribly underrated in this fandom. I do not like that. :( But it was LOADS of fun to write him! :D And I'm so relieved you found this hot. I don't know if you've read my angsting on Twitter - I was so worried that this fic might sound extremely lame and not hot at all. :/ THANK YOU!! :)

[sheep_emilia]

Definitely! I don't get it! He's so...
I've seen some, but - while I believed you were angsting, I didn't believe for a sec it'll not be hot! I mean, come on! You always write explosively hot stuff! The kind that makes me not want to write for a while because I feel inadequate, tbqh!
Basically - I know you really felt like that... But there's no reason! I always so look forward to reading the amazing hotness you create!

[txorakeriak]

He needs to be slashed more often!! :D

Well, I'm glad you have so much faith in me but I really didn't find it hot at all when I wrote it, and I was so nervous when I posted it after spending ages fiddling with it. And STOP IT, YOU ARE NOT INADEQUATE, your smut is a lot hotter than anything I could ever write!! And it all seems to come so effortlessly to you too! *glomp*

[still_glorious]

you!! omg! what are you doing to me? dear lord that was so frickin' hot. i refuse seeing this as fiction! this happenend! omg!!!!

[txorakeriak]

OMG, SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS!! I was so worried about it, seriously! I thought I'd lost my smut mojo, every single line sounded lame to me, so I tweaked and twisted the words over and over again... So yeah, I'm immensely relieved that you found the result acceptable!

(And I agree, this MUST have happened! XD)

Hope you had a fantastic birthday! *huggles*

[sophie_lfc]

oh my god, i'm impressed. that was amazing. :D

[txorakeriak]

Thank you! :D I'm very glad you think so! =)

[zimena]

Wow. I'm seriously impressed! This is such a gorgeous pairing, and I'm sure bibi_bloom absolutely loves you for this - first for getting them together and then the gorgeous hotness that follows :) I have absolutely no idea how anyone can write out sex in this much HOT detail - it's simply incomprehensible to me how that is possible. But it's VERY wonderful to read.

Straight to memories, both for the gorgeous hotness and for being a reference in how to write porn :)

[txorakeriak]

Wow, thank you so much for this kind comment! I was actually incredibly worried and nervous about this fic because everything I wrote seemed incredibly lame and boring and un-hot to me, and it didn't seem to improve much no matter how long I fiddled with it, but I'm very honoured that you think so highly of the end result! :D Your kind words make me blush a little. :) THANK YOU!

[chelsealady]

Holy crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hotness made in Southamerica...certainly Micho rules...
Martín is love... is time to read stories with him and write him actually... :D
Well done!
Peace!

[txorakeriak]

Thank you!!! :D I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And yes, please write him!!! People should pay more attention to the awesomeness that is Martín Cáceres!! :D (And Micho too, of course!!!)