fic: Invitation (Martín Demichelis/Martín Cáceres, NC-17)

[txorakeriak]

Title: Invitation
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Málaga CF/Sevilla FC
Pairing: Martín Demichelis/Martín Cáceres
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended.

Comments

[luxover]

oh... my god. i didn't have time to read this until now, but wow, am i glad i finally did. WOW. SO, SO, SO HOT, I CANNOT EVEN. i love how even though you say it's 100% pwp, there's still so much personality in this; i feel like i know exactly who your martin and your micho are, and that's so awesome. and you have some really, really great details in this, too (i'm trying reeeaaaaally hard to look past the HOT HOT HOT). i mean, this line: He raises his hips slightly, waiting for Micho to nudge his knees underneath the Uruguayan's thighs... even taken out of context so that i'm not looking at it purely sexually, this is such a dead-on, really beautiful detail. idk idk i just loved this whole thing. so, so well done, and super hot. A++++ i will definitely be re-visiting this one

[txorakeriak]

Oh my God, wow, I literally couldn't reply to this comment until now because I was so blown away by it. Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm not sure I deserve all this praise but I really appreciate it and I'm honoured because of who it comes from. I'm especially happy that you felt there was enough personality in the characters despite the PWP character of the fic. That's a great compliment and one of the most important things for me when I write fics. Thank you so much, your comment pretty much made my month. :)

[chaosbb]

I have seriously read all of your work on notjustagame about a million times and I can never, ever get enough of it.

This one is no different, I adore it in all its filthy glory!

[txorakeriak]

OMG, thank you so much! This makes me so happy right now, I don't even have words! I'm honoured you like my stuff so much! :) Thanks a ton for this wonderful comment! :D

[chaosbb]

I'll tell you a completely not creepy at all secret:

I always leave either Empanada, Hunger (oh god that kink...), No Sex or The Corruption of Carra (absolute favourite ever) open already loaded on my itouch internet so I can read it during the day when I want to die and it looks like I'm just flicking through my music :')

I just really adore your writing so much...it's the perfect balance of everything. So much love!

[chaosbb]

Also this is a million times more amazing now the world has seen Martín's dick!