Comments | txorakeriak: fic: The Pursuit of Perfection (Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui, PG-13)

txorakeriak

fic: The Pursuit of Perfection (Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui, PG-13)

Feb 13, 2011 11:06

Title: The Pursuit of Perfection
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Athletic Club Bilbao
Pairing: Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence ( Read more... )

player: gurpegi, player: orbaiz, team: athleeeeeeeee...tic!, #fanfiction

Comments 17

dfotw February 13 2011, 11:38:56 UTC

*SQUEE*

This is SO. ADORABLE!!!

Matchmaker!Iker is all kinds of determined and funny, and the misunderstanding between Pablo and Carlos really reaches Shakespearing proportions at times, and I love the fact that, throughout the fic, their friendship is there, in the background but giving a believable basis to everything that's happened.

And that little schedule of missed opportunities made my day, too!

Between this fic and a cup of hot chocolate, my Sunday morning is suddenly much brighter!

:D

txorakeriak February 14 2011, 19:42:59 UTC

OMG! *squeeeee* You read this! And you liked it! And you commented! OMG! :D

Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this so much! You're absolutely spot on about the "Shakespearean proportions" this thing reaches, and it was a lot of fun to write. :D I'm also glad that the friendship between them shone through because that's one of the most important points of this and I was hoping to convey it. :D

THANK YOU!

(Mmmm, chocolate! :D And it was Igor, not Iker, btw. ;))

dfotw February 14 2011, 20:17:37 UTC

See why I should write comments only when I am completely awake (ie, not on a Sunday morning)? Of course it's Igor. Oh, look, and I misspelled Shakespearean too. *facepalm*

ANYWAY, it was a lovely fic and your point on their friendship came out really well!

:D

txorakeriak February 15 2011, 22:51:21 UTC

Oh no, I really loved your comment! :D I thought it was cute. :) And I'm still so glad you enjoyed this fic! *glomps*

liberta February 13 2011, 14:10:43 UTC

:D. This is my face right now, big loony smile. This is absolutely wonderful.

txorakeriak February 14 2011, 19:43:18 UTC

My face is quite exactly the same after having read your wonderful comment. :)

sheep_emilia February 13 2011, 15:04:14 UTC

Welll... I held on for a couple of hours :)
And now I looks like this:
:)
:)
:)
*VERY STUPID GRIN*
I loved it. I loved to bits, I love the characters and the pairing, I loved the misunderstandings and the happy end. I love the way you write - it's always true - but I love the way you lovingly wrote them so much, I can't even express it well enough ( ... )

txorakeriak February 14 2011, 19:43:33 UTC

OMG, YAY!!! I'm SO GLAD you enjoyed this so much! *bounces around madly* And I'm also glad that my opinion of these two awesome guys came across in my writing! :D This is a really important fic for me, so it's good to know it didn't disappoint! :) And I just loved the idea of Igor playing matchmaker when it entered my head, there was no way I was going to pass on it! :D ( ... )

sheep_emilia February 15 2011, 00:36:30 UTC

Well, I honestly ADORED it!
You did a splendid, splendid job with these two :)

txorakeriak February 15 2011, 22:52:09 UTC

Thank you, I'm very very happy that you adored it! :D

templargirl February 14 2011, 02:59:50 UTC

Oh My Gawd, this is SO amazing ♥ ♥ ♥

txorakeriak February 14 2011, 19:43:51 UTC

OMG, thank you SO much! I'm thrilled you liked it! :D

distira February 20 2011, 21:04:48 UTC

oh you posted this! :) :) i don't know why it took me so long to see this XD you already know what i think, but i wanted to drop a line anyway. lovely work!

txorakeriak March 14 2011, 22:12:33 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it! And thanks again for the great beta! =)