Comments | txorakeriak: fic: The Pursuit of Perfection (Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui, PG-13)

txorakeriak

fic: The Pursuit of Perfection (Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui, PG-13)

Feb 13, 2011 11:06

Title: The Pursuit of Perfection
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Athletic Club Bilbao
Pairing: Pablo Orbaiz/Carlos Gurpegui
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence ( Read more... )

player: gurpegi, player: orbaiz, team: athleeeeeeeee...tic!, #fanfiction

Comments 17

july_v March 15 2011, 01:24:35 UTC

Okay so I was gonna g to bed early today... ahahaha I failed, obviously.
But, don't ask me why I chose this pairing to read since I really don't know them, this kept me up and it's beautiful and awkward and romantic and sort of frustrating. There was a point where I was not sure what was going on anymore in their conversation.
And this gave me the most awful belly cramps I have had in a while, too.

<3

txorakeriak March 16 2011, 22:46:28 UTC

I usually fail at going to bed early as well, LOL. XD

But OMG, YOU READ THIS FIC? *beams* It's special for me because these two guys don't get any attention in the fandom at all, which is a shame because they're awesome. Oh, and I've been having a major crush on Gurpegi since Bilbao (I'll post a report with all the info soon!). *cough* ;)

So glad you enjoyed the story! Hope it wasn't too confusing at the end! I was aiming for something "Shakespearean", with the two guys completely mistaking each other - which wasn't easy to write at all! XD

Belly cramps? Oh noes! I'm sorry to hear that. What caused them? :/

Thanks for reading and commenting! This means a lot to me, you know? :D

july_v March 17 2011, 23:31:11 UTC

I was looking for reading material. I am not picky with pairings in football. At least ... I love reading unknown pairings, but I am likely to skip anything barfa. So yeah, this is fine.

Oh hey there, you are talking to a student who has been analysing lots of Shakespeare. I admit I love his sonnets. a whole bloody lot. They're perverted. And slashy sometimes. Worth a read.

Belly cramps... happy/sad ones come with well written fics and nicely described emotions. Like when your belly just feels odd because something emotionally affects you when ypu read it. i got that ^^ It's fine. It passes.

When i have time i will keep reading. You're making me like Bilbao more and more with every fic or excited post about them! Oh and watching them play does the rest. ^-^