Title: Dilemma
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txorakeriakFandom: Football RPS / FC Barcelona
Pairing: Josep Guardiola/Lionel Messi
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is for my
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OMG, there are no words for how GLAD I am that you liked this. I was so nervous because I didn't think I really answered your prompt, but at the same time the muses were so persistent that I just had to write this. To hear that you loved it so much, and to read about all the little details you liked, and the way you perfectly summarize what I wanted to convey with this story, is just immensely rewarding. Thank you so so much, I don't even know what to say! :)
*glomps back like mad*
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The little fantasy episodes were the first things that came to my mind when I read dfotw's prompt, and I just had to use them somehow. Also, it's been quite a while since I wrote proper porn, so I must say I enjoyed this a lot. XDDDD
Glad I managed to make the ending satisfying! It's exactly what I wanted to achieve. :D
Thanks again for betaing this for me, and for giving me so many lovely compliments. You're so kind, I don't even know what to say. <3
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The ending was excellent. I loved the surprise and it fit the rest of the story well!
No problem, seriously. I love to do beta-reading for you! *HUGS*
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*ducks*
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Apart from that, I like the juxtaposition in this - Lionel's side, Pep's side - and the conclusion was very sweet. :)
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