fic: Dilemma (Josep Guardiola/Lionel Messi, NC-17)

Oct 16, 2010 12:03

Title: Dilemma
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS / FC Barcelona
Pairing: Josep Guardiola/Lionel Messi
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is for my ( Read more... )

.football, player: messi, fb: guardiola, team: fc barcelona, #fanfiction

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dfotw October 16 2010, 11:27:08 UTC
Oh. My. Gods ( ... )

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txorakeriak October 16 2010, 15:26:23 UTC
*immense exhale of relief*

OMG, there are no words for how GLAD I am that you liked this. I was so nervous because I didn't think I really answered your prompt, but at the same time the muses were so persistent that I just had to write this. To hear that you loved it so much, and to read about all the little details you liked, and the way you perfectly summarize what I wanted to convey with this story, is just immensely rewarding. Thank you so so much, I don't even know what to say! :)

*glomps back like mad*

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just_jenni October 16 2010, 12:47:12 UTC
Well, this was truly enjoyable ( ... )

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txorakeriak October 16 2010, 15:30:27 UTC
Yay, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it's not your pairing! :)

The little fantasy episodes were the first things that came to my mind when I read dfotw's prompt, and I just had to use them somehow. Also, it's been quite a while since I wrote proper porn, so I must say I enjoyed this a lot. XDDDD

Glad I managed to make the ending satisfying! It's exactly what I wanted to achieve. :D

Thanks again for betaing this for me, and for giving me so many lovely compliments. You're so kind, I don't even know what to say. <3

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just_jenni October 17 2010, 12:43:31 UTC
I love how you mixed the fantasy episodes with porn! It worked GREAT.

The ending was excellent. I loved the surprise and it fit the rest of the story well!

No problem, seriously. I love to do beta-reading for you! *HUGS*

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liberta October 16 2010, 16:11:38 UTC
Meh, I like this too much to throw a rotten tomato. /disappoint

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txorakeriak October 16 2010, 16:19:41 UTC
LOL, you can do that anyway, even if you like this. XDD

*ducks*

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liberta October 16 2010, 16:22:09 UTC
naww, that would be mean. *weighs tomato in hand*

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liberta October 16 2010, 16:25:16 UTC
btw I love your default icon. ehehe.

Apart from that, I like the juxtaposition in this - Lionel's side, Pep's side - and the conclusion was very sweet. :)

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txorakeriak October 16 2010, 17:20:39 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

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firehigher October 16 2010, 20:04:32 UTC
ooh, I love a good May/December relationship fic. This was truly lovely (and I'm a little sucker for this pairing). =]

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txorakeriak October 16 2010, 21:50:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this story. :)

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