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FIC: Terra Firma (4/5)

Feb 12, 2009 23:24

Title: Terra Firma, Chapter 4
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Cedric, OFC
Rating: PG-13
Warning: My new favorite type of AU, in which Cedric replaces the epilogue.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter & friends belong to JKR.
Summary: Years after the war, the last place Harry expected to see Cedric was on a plane headed to Florence.
A/N: Links will take you to pretty ( Read more... )

fanfiction: novella, author: rotaryphones, cedric lives

Comments 14

b00kaddict February 14 2009, 04:20:57 UTC

Oh, that was lovely! Alida is wonderful, and the scene with the massage was really sweet.

I flew to New York this week, on a small airplane. Sadly, the flight attendant, while very nice, was not Harry Potter. ;)

rotaryphones February 15 2009, 15:50:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm going to be flying in March, but I believe Harry only works on flights coming in and out of London. Too bad. :)

wirrrn February 14 2009, 08:20:28 UTC

Hey,

Lovely. The nerve-wracking accidental coming out thing happens more often than you think *g*

btw- Uffizi now? With the skull in the chapel floor? Admit it, you're using the geography *from* HANNIBAL, aren't you?! What's next? Il Porcino, or the Pharmacia di Santa Maria?! :checks boys for bite marks: *g*

rotaryphones February 15 2009, 15:53:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the coming out scene worked for you.

And how about this: Harry and Cedric walked the halls of the Uffizi, unaware that the skull of Draco Malfoy lay just below their feet.

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rotaryphones February 15 2009, 15:58:25 UTC

Thank you, and you're not slow at all! Cedric was a total jerk, haha, but only out of irrational panic. And it's not like Harry is someone he could easily push around anyway. :) This was a chapter of a lot of confrontation and confession, so I'm glad it all worked for you!

peppermintjam February 16 2009, 14:23:35 UTC

Oh my gosh! When Alida opened the door as Cedric and Harry were kissing I got so surprised! XD I was totally feeling the moment! *_*

I really like that you've weaved some of the skills Harry learned from his flight attendant job into his life. They really come in handy!

Oh no! One more chapter left? I'm really interested to see where Cedric and Harry will be during the epilogue! Can't wait! :)<3

rotaryphones February 16 2009, 23:15:33 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you were feeling the coming out scene. :) And it was fun imagining how flight!Harry would react to such a situation. Thanks for reading!

ext_87882 February 17 2009, 01:43:02 UTC

“What corridor?” asked Harry, who had been asking that particular question all morning.
LOL!

The only thing I can complain about is that it's almost over! :)
That was the most human chapter. Cedric's reaction felt totally real.
The conversation, the massage, the coming out, all sweet.

And what about Alida? She's wonderful! Love her now more than ever before!
I'm going to miss her. :D

rotaryphones February 17 2009, 06:14:27 UTC

That was the most human chapter.

Thank you, that is such a compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed all the parts. And there will be a bit more of Alida at the end, so don't worry. :)