Muse crit!

[twonations]

• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right and why. I will delete threads that are just pointless. So no going "omg your muse compliments mine so well, they're perfect together.", or "My only critique is that you need to be around more."
• No bashing. Please keep your

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[howonton]

✿ sideqwest
muse(s): howonton

[byungari]

I don't know where to start, so I will mark my place here and come back to edit. ♡

Don't reply to this~

[yeors]

Howon is a man among men, and you really got that down very well! Just by how he talks, takes up responsibility and treats others, he's become someone very special to us. Even the odd quirk of fail and endearing teases make him much more than just a muse emulating at life. Like most hardcore guys, he tends to keep a good space between him and others, which is very much like the real. I always saw Howon as a lone wolf type, able to sustain himself and live without the help of others, and be proud of it, but there are so many facets to him that we don't get to see filmed (the extremely rowdy and hilarious Howon is one) because he's just not safe for the public!! He said as much himself! Hahaha! I love this muse, and he's well-liked all around, you should know! Sungyeol will need a paddle to keep people at bay hahaha. We got your back.

And now for the other side of the coin... I think my only (extremely reluctant) note is that Howon is too nice, to everyone. He's very helpful, does more than his share, and gives way to others. We've

[borabeats]

✿ Sideqwest
muse(s): borabeats

She's a very new muse and I'm still trying to find my footing, so, hit me with what you've got...if there's anything.

[songsheet]

Spot, spot! Brain is fried atm, though. Hehe. :3

[borabeats]

Bora can be very kind and quite amusing. She's easy going and fun to talk to; however, I do wish she would show more than just the one level. It seems like she's good for an easy conversation but it seems like it'd be harder to have a deep, strong friendship. I say work on keeping Bora engaged with the people she talks to and to show genuine interest in getting to know those people! I know my muse wants to know her better as well!

[borabeats]

I'll definitely try improve on that. She's just finding it difficult to broach those sort of topics but if I keep trying, I'll get there eventually. ^^ She does want to get to know the people she talks to better, so I'll make sure to get that across more too. I'd like to apologize in advance if things get awkward. >_<;;

[dancingbcj]

✿ sarangbox
muse(s): dancingbcj

Leaving this here, in case there's something that need to be said!

[me2fire]

... HAR. I am late in seeing this. XDDD

Can I just say I love your Changjo!? Hahaha. But I think you already know that. ♥

Dara enjoys talking to him very much. She's still pretty new and wasn't very sure on who to poke in the comm. We're both really glad we poked you. :3 I like how he's so childish, but yet I'm also able to see a mature side to him which I think is not so obvious due to his childishness. I do know that it's of course due to the fact he's the youngest in Tin Tap.

I can't really say much since we've scened only once so far. But keep doing what you're doing. ♥

... I've written a novel. OTL

[dancingbcj]

Not late at all! Thank you for the comment. <3

Changjo, he's like a chameleon, changing the way he interacts with others just so he can blend in with them but he's usually quite (?! It's true! haha). So we're very glad you decided to poke him first 'cause he would have never imagined to do the same to your muse, mostly because he doesn't sure how your muse will look pass him and it's not helping that she's a sunbaenim either.

Dara, what can I say, my kid loves her and her hyperness, and we think it's adorable how noona-ish she acts around her dongsaeng. <3

[me2fire]

<3

Then I can trully say that we're happy we randomly poked you. Dara really didn't know what would be his reaction actually. XD And I really liked that first conversation they had because I think both of them weren't really quite sure on how the other would look at himself/herself, but they were both able to connect. ^-^

jfslakfjla. Thank you! I'm still trying to flesh her out and was planning to ask for crit maybe in the next month or two so this heads up is a boost of confidence. <3 I'm happy you somewhat see the noona side of her. I think she's too much like a child at times. ^^;

[songsheet]

✿ sideqwest
muse(s): namwoo

Still trying desperately to flesh him out, so tell me stuff. :)

[byungari]

Ha, spot. ♡

Yes, it's this icon.

Don't respond. ㅋㅋ

[howonton]

ah, woo. we love woo T_T ... i know it doesn't show much, but really, it's true! i was stuck between playing hoya or woohyun, and i'm very glad i didn't pick the latter haha. i think he's perfect the way he is. vain, a brat, affection and attention whore. and i know that sounds kind of terrible, but it's so woohyun XD ... we're slowly getting to see the other side, though, and really looking forward to that, too, because it's obvious he's so much more than the other sides i mentioned. wee!

[yeors]

Woohyun is so ... from the moment he stepped into our world, he rocked it. Literally. It was just a wonder to have him be exactly how we imagined Woohyun to be, that we hardly believed it. I mean, he's pails of grease, tons of wit, and snide remarks, and can be downright mean without trying hard to please people which some find difficult to do... I'm glad, verily, that you don't fall back on trying to be a nice guy Woohyun, because that's not who he is at all (at least not for the pure and simple reason of wanting to be nice, or to be liked...he's crafty, it seems!!). He's not that perfect and holy man that's too good to be true type, and you played it accordingly. It helps I think, that you came into this with the notion you're in for quite a lot. We hoped you'd feel welcome...we plan to keep you forever. Did we mention how much we love Woohyun yet? Well, we do. Although this is just the first month, there's so much future I can see, future plans, future mischief, future bonding.. a future is all I need to know we want to know more

[oceandip]

✿ wirecity
muse(s): oceandip

[perfections]

I honestly can't say too much, because I know next to nothing about Block B, but I just wanted to ecourage you with what I've seen so far. Taeil seems like one of those quiet, but brilliant types you have to get to know before you realize how amazing he truly is. I'm not sure if that's what the real is like (or what you were going for), but I think it's great. He's the type of muse you look forward getting to know. We can't wait to see what he unfolds to be, and we'd like to see him around more when we get back! Keep it up! ^^

PS: Like I said, I'm a newbie when it comes to them so, sorry for seeming a little clueless sometimes, we're learning through you guys. :3

[oceandip]

Even if you don't know Block B that well, I really appreciate this! Taeil is generally... off to the side, when the guys are all together, staying quiet and giving them all the chance to shine. There are a lot of other little things I've noticed from watching their reality show, too, but he's definitely the quiet type until he trusts someone enough to open up to them. So I'm relieved that's coming through? And while I can't guarantee he'll make more effort to talk to Taeyeon, because god is he mortified he'll say something wrong, I look forward to them getting to talk when they can!