Muse crit!
• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right and why. I will delete threads that are just pointless. So no going "omg your muse compliments mine so well, they're perfect together.", or "My only critique is that you need to be around more."
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muse(s): dancingbcj
Leaving this here, in case there's something that need to be said!
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Can I just say I love your Changjo!? Hahaha. But I think you already know that. ♥
Dara enjoys talking to him very much. She's still pretty new and wasn't very sure on who to poke in the comm. We're both really glad we poked you. :3 I like how he's so childish, but yet I'm also able to see a mature side to him which I think is not so obvious due to his childishness. I do know that it's of course due to the fact he's the youngest in Tin Tap.
I can't really say much since we've scened only once so far. But keep doing what you're doing. ♥
... I've written a novel. OTL
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Changjo, he's like a chameleon, changing the way he interacts with others just so he can blend in with them but he's usually quite (?! It's true! haha). So we're very glad you decided to poke him first 'cause he would have never imagined to do the same to your muse, mostly because he doesn't sure how your muse will look pass him and it's not helping that she's a sunbaenim either.
Dara, what can I say, my kid loves her and her hyperness, and we think it's adorable how noona-ish she acts around her dongsaeng. <3
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Then I can trully say that we're happy we randomly poked you. Dara really didn't know what would be his reaction actually. XD And I really liked that first conversation they had because I think both of them weren't really quite sure on how the other would look at himself/herself, but they were both able to connect. ^-^
jfslakfjla. Thank you! I'm still trying to flesh her out and was planning to ask for crit maybe in the next month or two so this heads up is a boost of confidence. <3 I'm happy you somewhat see the noona side of her. I think she's too much like a child at times. ^^;
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From my point of view I can see the real to be like that, well I've only watched a couple of episodes of their 2NE1 TV and that's about it so I don't know for sure haha Real Dara is a lot more awkward IMO, I've once read that she once deleted her bandmate's number since they didn't reply to her message - my point is- I can totally justify your muse's dorky and fun! personality, if that makes any sense. ^^
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I hope she can continue being a cool noona to him! :)
XDDD I've also read that the real Dara did do that. XD It does. Again, thank you for the crit~! I think you gave me more crit than I gave you. ^^;;;
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