muse crit

[twonations]

• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right and why.
• No bashing. Please keep your critiques polite and constructive. That doesn't mean you can't be a little bit harsh, but stay polite and civil.
• Give everyone at least one positive and one negative point. It can be

Comments

[luxuryspell]

✿ sarangbox
muse(s): luxuryspell

[[ Any small thing you could give us would be greatly appreciated. ]]

OOC

[fivepointsix]

I'm not quite sure about her character only because I haven't researched her much but she seems like a really sweet and intelligent woman. ^^ It's definitely refreshing to have one of those around. I'm really impressed she can get paragraphs out of Jay since he's usually a one-liner kind of guy. Hehe.

We haven't really scened enough for me to come up with something to work on either but if I notice something I'll let you know!

Re: OOC

[luxuryspell]

Thank you so much. ): We really hope to do justice to the real, who's the most elegant woman ever. /bias ;___; But we hope they can get around to talking more in the future!

[hardluckhero]

✿ Sarangbox
muse(s): hardluckhero

Quite possibly the most useless time to post considering he just showed up, but if you noticed anything right off the bat... also this is a FFA and you can feel free to hit me with crit now and or later, here or via PM. I'm always looking to improve.

Extremely paranoid of messing up with JE interactions

[hardluckhero]

That was really interesting for me, being that I'm actually more acquainted with KARA and I know what's going on so a lot of her words meant differently to me than they did to Okada. Nicole was really great to comment with. I'm still struggling a bit with his voice so being able to have a conversation with they did actually kind of helped even if he talked entirely too much. ♥ I hope KARA gets to come to Japan soon because a daycare visit sounds too cute.

[lovekicks]

✿ theramyunbowl
muse(s): lovekicks

[jonghyun_bling]

I wish we interacted more. You seem like a really nice person to be around.

[lovekicks]

Thank you. ♥ Will try to have Kylee online more... or at least post more. ^^

[charmdust]

✿ sarangbox
muse(s): charmdust

It's my first time playing Krystal. And an SM muse in general! Please let me know if I'm doing anything wrong with her. :( ♥

[charmdust]

It's totally fine! I understand. ♥ Haha, I think that's everyone's main goal with her. :"( But I'm a little confused, heh. Did you mean that in the sense that her personality's not clear enough? But I think I know what you mean! Thank you for pointing that out. And ugh, thank you so much for making the first moves with the IMing and whatnot. I promise Krystal will do the first move-making soon. :( ♥

[magiclizzy]

✿ sarangbox
muse(s): magiclizzy

I'm still new to playing Lizzy so I might've been a little more reclusive than I'd like to ^^; Concrit is greatly welcome!

[a_ing]

I won't let my bias show! Alright maybe a little. I'm sorry I haven't played with you more, but Raina's been down lately so it's been hard for me to get her out there 8( Lizzy is both cute and excitable and still spot-on from what I can see. When we've played more I'll be able to offer more insight. For now, I promise to poke you soon!