muse crit

[twonations]

• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right and why.
• No bashing. Please keep your critiques polite and constructive. That doesn't mean you can't be a little bit harsh, but stay polite and civil.
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[hardluckhero]

✿ Sarangbox
muse(s): hardluckhero

Quite possibly the most useless time to post considering he just showed up, but if you noticed anything right off the bat... also this is a FFA and you can feel free to hit me with crit now and or later, here or via PM. I'm always looking to improve.

Extremely paranoid of messing up with JE interactions

[hardluckhero]

That was really interesting for me, being that I'm actually more acquainted with KARA and I know what's going on so a lot of her words meant differently to me than they did to Okada. Nicole was really great to comment with. I'm still struggling a bit with his voice so being able to have a conversation with they did actually kind of helped even if he talked entirely too much. ♥ I hope KARA gets to come to Japan soon because a daycare visit sounds too cute.

[hardluckhero]

She definitely didn't. It was interesting that they could get philosophical. I like that it's very clear she thinks a lot and is really a fleshed out muse. It definitely has made her fun to play against so far. I'm looking forward to it too. ♥

Passing by!

[hardluckhero]

If I remember rightly, and I might not, Okada isn't very close to the rest of JE (V6 aside). It's probably because he's so quiet? The only people I can remember being named as his friends in JE are Domoto Tsuyoshi and Arashi's Sho. I hope that helps you a tiny bit with your interaction worries! ♥

Re: Passing by!

[hardluckhero]

His...quietness is something I'm trying to pin down. I think I've had him say too much so far. It's a little difficult. I did notice that his list of close friends was very small. I guess JE always confuses me a lot cause I'm not sure what people should call people... So I resort to kun a lot or avoid name usage all together. I suppose that will come with time... I hope. It's just really daunting!

Re: Passing by!

[hardluckhero]

I understand completely! ♥ My general first impression is that you're doing a good job of making him quiet and serious without having him turn into a silent plank of wood. As for the honorifics, -kun in general should be fine. There's always -san as a fall back. I think all of the JE in sarangbox is his age or younger anyways? So you're fine! :D

Re: Passing by!

[hardluckhero]

Thank you ♥

[hatenai]

I've watched a few V6 TV shows, and that's about it, so I don't know enough to be very helpful. But it appears that you're doing fine! And what you said to the passing-by anon about his quietness - If anyone should relate with you it is me. XD I understand. It almost feels like every comment Ohno posts is too much! But I know a mun who has played another quiet sort of guy for years, and she said that it's easier to get that quiet side across in scenes, because she assumes that when her muse logs on it's because he's in the mood to talk to people, and it's also easier in general for quiet people to talk online. So maybe that's a good way to think about it? If he didn't feel like talking, he'd be away.. making wood thing? lol. I'm still trying to pin it down too. I'm just lucky Ohno is more talkative in private settings, whoever he's talking to. Okada probably isn't though, if his real doesn't have many friends... XD I don't know. I hope you find a way to get comfy with him, because it's great having more older guys around~ (And yes,

[hardluckhero]

I've had a lot of shy muses but playing a muse that's simply quiet rather than shy is a lot different. And actually everything you said helped a lot into putting it into perspective and everything. Okada really mustn't be... what with his 3 friends... The more I comment around with him the more I start to get comfortable so hopefully it will work out. I just have to get over my nerves. ♥ Thank you very much for all your comments.