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Fic - Gradual Flirting

Jul 31, 2010 10:06

Title: Gradual Flirting
Author: twilightHDfan
Fandom: The Fast and the Furious
Pairing/Characters: Brian/Dom
Rating/Category: R/Slash
Prompt: Fast and the Furious, Dom/Brian, flirting
Spoilers: For the fourth slightly
Summary: It had started gradually, so gradually that Brian hadn’t even realized they were doing it, made him wonder if Dom even realized ( Read more... )

pairing: brian/dom, rating: r, fandom: fast and furious

Comments 19

desariwalker July 31 2010, 05:19:23 UTC

This is great! I loved it. Can definitely see the boys getting together this way.

Thanks so much for sharing :)

twilighthdfan August 1 2010, 05:23:35 UTC

Thanks :D. So glad that you loved it and could see the boys getting together this way. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

tmelange July 31 2010, 05:21:09 UTC

Very nice! Poor girls, thinking they had a chance, lol. Bravo!

twilighthdfan August 1 2010, 05:24:19 UTC

LOL. Yeah, they really had no chance once both boys realised what they were doing. So glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

_profiterole_ July 31 2010, 12:20:23 UTC

I think you've got them spot on. I love how playful this is. <3

twilighthdfan August 1 2010, 05:25:05 UTC

Yay! so glad you feel that they're spot on. I think these two would be very playful if they ever got together. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

persnickett July 31 2010, 13:37:34 UTC

Oh boys! Always racing!

This was nice and sexy and I love your Brian, very canon with the way he can't stop grinning around Dom. And Dom being a gentleman and getting Brian his jacket so the girls wont be traumatized by the monster in his pants! Giving that low chuckle when Brian makes his move? Mmm. Yes.

Nice work.

twilighthdfan August 1 2010, 05:28:05 UTC

LOL. They can't resist making everything into a race (I'm sure its so they can get a prize ;)). So glad that you felt Brian was canon (yay!) and, LOL, Dom was trying to be a gentleman. Glad you liked the chuckle too (one of my favourite parts)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad you liked it :D.

ainamclane July 31 2010, 14:37:48 UTC

i miss the facebook-botton "Like" coz its awesome and i've got nothing to say due to that XD *speechless is*

twilighthdfan August 1 2010, 09:50:38 UTC

It would be awesome if LJ had like buttons (I love them on FB). Glad that you liked it and, yay!, for it making you speechless. Thanks for reading and reviewing :).

ainamclane August 1 2010, 10:34:53 UTC

u're welcome ;)
yeah, lj needs "like", "love", "absolutely love" etc buttons XD would be easier and since i'm usually lazy in commenting (eg once a blue moon) would be easier for many ;)