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Fic - Possessive - Chapter 10

Mar 26, 2010 10:01

Title - Possessive
Chapter - Uneasy Meeting (10/20?)
Rating - R/NC-17
Pairing - Jake/Paul, canon couples
Disclaimer - Don't belong to me. If I did own it, things would be much much different. As it is, all characters and recognisable plots belong to Stephenie Meyer and her affiliates. I'm just doing this for fun!
Spoiler - Up to New Moon at least.
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fanfic: possessive, pairing: jake/paul, fandom: twilight

Comments 20

xenasoul March 26 2010, 08:20:51 UTC

The end is killing me!!! Me wants moar!!!!
Love this fic.

twilighthdfan April 2 2010, 07:13:06 UTC

Sorry. It was an evil place to leave it, but I couldn't resist. So glad that you're loving the fic. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D.

ms_pao_pao March 26 2010, 13:22:53 UTC

Ah~ The evil psycho vampire? No Rachel, they're not married...yet. For now they're just...soulmates? Nice update, can't wait for next chapter.

twilighthdfan April 2 2010, 07:15:46 UTC

The evil psycho vampire is around, but not the one hunting Jake. And poor Rachel, she has no idea that she's already lost. I like the idea of Jake and Paul being soul mates.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad you liked the update. The next chapter is up now :).

evil_knitter March 26 2010, 14:40:17 UTC

Oh my, I DO love this story. I feel badly for Rachel. How in the world will she react when she finds out it's Jacob? I don't understand why she's so into Paul and I can't remember why she's back on the reservation, lol. I am glad that Jacob is coming to terms with his relationship with Paul and is staking his claim, even if it's a little too subtle for his sister to pick up on (although did I detect a little nugget of realization in Rachel in this section?). Well done. Can't wait for the next update.

twilighthdfan April 2 2010, 07:20:42 UTC

Yeah, poor Rachel, she has no idea that she was never really even in the race to begin with. Although she doesn't react too badly when she finds out (and she's back on the reservation just visiting. LOL, which I don't think I explained), mainly because she does sort of suspect. And I'm glad you liked Jake becoming more possessive of Paul.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad that you're loving this story. The next chapter is up now :)

seguin19 March 27 2010, 19:29:19 UTC

Another good chapter, and now I'm wondering if the man Jacob met was the same one that Paul had met earlier ;)

And where are my cookies?? You said cookies to anyone who read it!! Of course I was going to read it you have me hooked.

twilighthdfan April 2 2010, 07:25:03 UTC

Thanks :). So glad that you liked the chapter. And I don't think it's giving too much away to say that it was the same vampire. And, LOL, *hands over cookies*.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad that you're liking the story (and yay! for being hooked). The next chapter is up now :).

MONDAY IS NOW! musabitheseer March 29 2010, 20:37:06 UTC

I do not think even managed to make a comment about this story before and I am very sorry, because it is fabulous !!!!!!!!!!!!
No, I'm not kidding !!^_____^ In the early chapters my eyes were bulging and foaming at the mouth ..... hmmmmmm ..... ihihihihihi Paul is always so "nice" when claiming his territory! ahahahaha and Jacob is so .... so ....... I'd call it better with "kawaii"! ahahahhaha
vampire who will end badly .... Mica will be Laurent!? I bet ....... I do not know ....... perhaps a drop head? ahahahahha not wait. *____*.

Re: MONDAY IS NOW! twilighthdfan April 2 2010, 07:29:40 UTC

LOL. No worries. I always do that. I'm just glad that you're liking the story. And Paul is very 'nice' to Jake isn't he? Sorry there hasn't been much smut since the first few chapters, but there will be more in the next couple of chapters. As for the vampire ... more revealed soon :).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapters are up now :D.