Fic - Possessive - Chapter 7

[twilighthdfan]

Paul pulls on his leather jacket as he walks out the door.

The bonfire was a tradition on the Res. Every year they would have a huge bonfire and party, people cooking food, dancing, getting together and just having fun.

This year he has even more of a reason to go.

Not only because of his place in the pack, but also because of Jake. Who he knows is

Comments

[ms_pao_pao]

Oh wow~ you actually made me not hate Bella.

And Paul in leather jacket, yummy~ Nice chapter.

[twilighthdfan]

LOL. I was very surprised that Bella turned out likable too. I usually hate her in stories and thought she would be annoying in this, but the plot bunnies had other ideas.

Mmm, Paul in a leather jacket. There's this one photo I have on my computer (actually I think it's two) that was the inspiration for that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. More up soon :)

[ms_pao_pao]

I kinda dislike her in canon and most of stories...usually it'd take a lot to make me liking her, yet you did it smoothly.

Paul will look hot wearing anything~ *googling for Paul's pic in leather jacket*

[twilighthdfan]

Yay! for liking her then :).

If you can't find the pic let me know, and I'll post it for you (if I can figure out how to do it in a comment. LOL.)

[evil_knitter]

Lovely! I am intrigued by this line from Bella: "Well, I mean there might be some things which would make me … Anyway that’s not important." WTF is that? Foreshadowing or just a random statement?

I'm liking this more and more. Yay!

[twilighthdfan]

Yay! Glad you liked it (and more and more is even better) :). That line could be foreshadowing, I'm just not sure if I'm going to go down that path (of what I had in mind for that sentence) though. So let's just say it's a random statement for now.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. More up soon :)

[lydia270]

loving the quick updates :) cant wait for jakes sister is get a clue :)

[lydia270]

is = to

[twilighthdfan]

Glad you're liking the quick updates :). And, unfortunately, Rachel doesn't get a clue for awhile (Paul is just too distracting).

Thanks for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

[kattz_1905]

I love this Bella!

[twilighthdfan]

Thanks :). So glad you liked her in this. I hadn't planned for her to be likable, but the plot bunnies had different ideas.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

[mia_dcwut_09]

i just had to read this update when im suppose to be doing my homework
i loved bella in this
its seems so like me
with my gay friends and my sister
its awesome

[twilighthdfan]

LOL. Sorry! Didn't mean to distract you. I get distracted by fanfic far too much when I should be studying. I hope you got your homework done :).

So glad that you like Bella in this and I'm glad that she's coming across as believable :).

Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

[mia_dcwut_09]

I'm getting there on the homework:)
she is so much better than canon bella who's so agh!

[twilighthdfan]

Yay! for the getting homework done *looks at her own pile*. LOL.

Did you see the trailer for Eclipse? *sigh* pretty boys (if only slightly ruined by a certain female lead ;)).