we all write letters we'll never send and everyone knows it's all pretend.

May 13, 2008 23:39

we all write letters we'll never send and everyone knows it's all pretend.
edward/rosalie, edward/tanya. r. 1017.
As you may have heard, pretty poetry works rather well on girls.

Before you tear up this letter, give me the chance to tell you what I have to say.

You at least owe me that much.

I'm going to try and help you choose the right path, Bella.  ( Read more... )

edward/tanya, edward/rosalie, angst, kaiwynn, one-shot

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yoursolace May 14 2008, 05:49:28 UTC
i'm gonna try to read this and not cry.

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kaiwynn May 14 2008, 05:50:29 UTC
D:

don't cry. i don't want you to cry!

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adair7 May 14 2008, 06:09:19 UTC
Unbelievable. You managed to sully the perfect Cullen boy. You twisted his romance into something vile and I loved it!

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kaiwynn May 14 2008, 06:10:16 UTC
Thank you! I don't want him to be so perfect -- at least, not all the time. :D

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apresmoi May 14 2008, 06:09:53 UTC
I second the crying thing. Because gawd, it's so true

&hears;

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kaiwynn May 14 2008, 06:12:56 UTC
This is so strange -- I never intended for it to be sad. But I'm glad you can connect with it, though. ♥

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tju_tju_tju_tju May 14 2008, 06:11:14 UTC
Wow, this was really awesome. Such an interesting idea, and so well executed! I sort of wish this letter, or at least a version of it, would happen in canon -- because really, I have a hard time believing half of the stuff Edward says, and this would just... I dunno, it would just completely redeem the series for me. *shrug* Anyway, this was very awesome indeed and I enjoyed it!

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kaiwynn May 14 2008, 06:14:00 UTC
I have a hard time believing half of the stuff Edward says

As do I. It seems so impossible that one could be so perfect. I also wish this could be canon, but alas. We noncanon shippers are doomed.

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el_diablo4 May 14 2008, 06:11:24 UTC
oh my goodness, this was amazing. I love it!

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kaiwynn May 14 2008, 06:14:09 UTC
Thank you!

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