we all write letters we'll never send and everyone knows it's all pretend.

May 13, 2008 23:39

we all write letters we'll never send and everyone knows it's all pretend.
edward/rosalie, edward/tanya. r. 1017.
As you may have heard, pretty poetry works rather well on girls.

Before you tear up this letter, give me the chance to tell you what I have to say.

You at least owe me that much.

I'm going to try and help you choose the right path, Bella.  ( Read more... )

edward/tanya, edward/rosalie, angst, kaiwynn, one-shot

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thejellicoeroad May 14 2008, 06:43:25 UTC
brava. that was reallllllly good. it's nice to see a tarnished edward every once and a while, puts everything back into perspective. and you wrote it very believably too. if i didn't have faith in edward's goodness, i can so see him being the ******* you wrote him as.

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twilightcari11 May 14 2008, 23:13:57 UTC
Oh God! This is something I have never seen before, and it is really good-scratch that- I read it 3 times! Its not typically picture perfect Edward and I can actually picture him being a...an ass! haha! It kind of made my eyes watery b/c a) Rosalie turns out to be "nice" b) edward became an ass c) he was using rosalie and bella! This was extremly good!

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letxmexlove May 15 2008, 05:11:00 UTC
i absolutely loved this.
Fucking bravo.

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kissingdaylight May 15 2008, 06:22:52 UTC
This was beautiful and tragic, just the way I like them.

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jacyevans May 18 2008, 21:22:32 UTC
I love this. I love how you take their love and twist it into a complete lie, I love how you write Rosalie's voice - I absolutely love just everything about it.

I would love to see Bella's reaction to receiving something like this.

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kaiwynn May 18 2008, 21:23:39 UTC
thank you!

i actually haven't thought anything about bella's reaction. hmmm... plot bunny arriving?

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