#11 Push

[twilight_ave]

Title: Push

Raiting: NC-17

Pairings: Jaejoong x Yoochun
A/N: On a small break from Made of Blood and Bones(DBSK) and Unguarded(KT) because my muse demands this to be written. And it my first try at NC17 so please bear with me.
Summary: Before Yoochun had cut off his hair and Jae’s still hadn’t been dyed black, this had taken place in my own fangirl

Comments

[snoozing_kitten]

Being completely giddy after this is took me a *very* long time to find the button to leave a comment D=

**flails at you** This was cute, and just so yummy, and squee! Violent!Jae gives me a happy, (but only when he's teasing Chunnie) Yoo Chun was wonderful in this too... and you get a cookie for this because it rocked so hard I'm barely coherent.

[twilight_ave]

I get a cookie! *_* Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ^^

[blue_berii]

I just can say I really like it !
I love that they had sex before those things are said and that they are then said by Jae and that he leaves Yoochun just to recognize that he can definitely deal with it.
JaeChun is my newst obsession (and for that quite old), but for me it's the most difficult pairing, but you really hit the point. There are no angsty feelings(which easily occur) only pure desire - like it should be - and then and such an ending - also like it should be between them.

Thank you for sharing it!

[tumi18]

*blag*
JaeChun love!!!!!!!!!!
ive been deprived for months now and now *gives cookies*

i love how jae's being rough and dominant then the first one to confess
and told yoochun that he has to deal with it... ^^

[twilight_ave]

another cookie! *_*

♥

[x_voracity]

It took me a second to find the comment link ^__^

Ah~ I could have sworn I commented this before but I guess it slipped my mind.
The whole thing was lovely - not too angsty, which is hard when you're writing anything with dear Chun in it ^___^
Everything is very matter-of-fact and it creates a sort of open-ness for the characters and the story.
I wonder if openness is really a word - I don't think it is.
Lovely, dear :]

[evilsupergirl]

Ho ho, dominant Jae is just so perfect. And I love how that's exactly the way Chun likes it. This is great stuff.

And yeah I am actually in the middle of writing my own NC17 JaeChun.. but don't worry, it's nothing like this^^v

[twilight_ave]

write it write it! ^^ Im just dying for more jaechun love