Hi! Great story :) The ending was so sad, but I guess at the same time, it leaves you with some sort of hope. Definately better than everyone living happily ever after, after going through something like that. I really enjoyed this story, it was detailed, but not too detailed, and I really like the way you involved all the characters instead of just favouring one or two of them. And the image of Ziva wearing Abby's outfit, hahaha :) Fantastic stuff, seriously. Thanks!!! :D (and now I just wish I had an NCIS icon to fit)
I actually did some (poor) photoshopping to help me write any scene with her in it. But thank you so much for your feedback! :D Plus, I'm sure you can find someone who can photoshop Ziva's head on Abby's body. :3
Very good read, I love getting new gen stories to read. The ending was a bit sad, but so much more realistic then "Tony made a miraculous recovery instantly and went back to work"...I loved the way you went back to McGee being hit in the temple by Tony's paper ball, too...nice connection to the scene at the start.
Thank you so much for reading! It was a lot of fun to write, especially with the deadline of the Big Bang pushing me to write. I like gen stories more personally so I thought I'd write one. :3 Thanks again for reading! :D
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I actually did some (poor) photoshopping to help me write any scene with her in it. But thank you so much for your feedback! :D Plus, I'm sure you can find someone who can photoshop Ziva's head on Abby's body. :3
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Such a fascinating story and great use of everybody, I especially liked Jimmy trying to talk to the body :)
I loved the symmetry of the ending, and like the others said, the not happily-ever-after-straight-away.
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Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it! <3
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